Okay, firstly, any ratings/fixes, WILL be responded to with a R/F, if you leave a link. This deck is a deck that I would really like to build, I don't have most of these cards, and am eager to trade so that I can build this deck. Any card that appears in the form of a hyperlink, is a card that I need and will take you directly to my HAVE list. I will trade within Canada only UNLESS you want to send first. O/K thats it, so please help out, I really want to build this deck, but am very far from having the cards I need.

Monster (17):

Dark Ruler Ha Des X 1
D.D Warrior Lady X 3
Don Zaloog X 2
Blade Knight X 2
Marauding Captain X 2
Black Lustrer Soldier Envoy X 1
Spirit Reaper X 2
Fiber Jar X 1
Tribe Infecting Virus X 1
Reflect Bounder X 1
Meifiest the Infernal General X 1

Spells (14):

Giant Trunade X 2
Heavy Storm X 1
MST x 1
Forcefull Sentry X 1
Confiscation X 1
Swords of Revealing Light X 1
Pot of Greed X 1
Change of Heart X 1
Book of Moon X 2
Premature Burial X 1
Card Destruction X 1
Painfull Choice X 1

Traps (9)

Dust Tornado X 1
Raigeki Break X 1
Magic Cylinder X 1
Ring of Destruction X 1
Call of the Haunted X 1
Drop off X 2
Time Seal X 2

So yeah thats it. Please people I really wanna make this deck, even if you dont have a fix, but wanna leave a comment please do! The more bumps i get, the better chance of somebody seeing this who can trade. THX all!!!!!

Great,another Warrior/Hand Controlling Chaos deck........................................lol,jk,well not on the deck type but the offensiveness I may have caused...........

Ok,well,it's pretty good,I see what you are trying to acheive and it looks pretty good and I actually like it..................8/10..........


I know I didn't do much,but can you help my deck by any chance??????:http://www.yugiohrealms.com/forum/sh...d.php?t=404426

-3 Drop Off
+3 Time Seal
I've always preferred Time Seal over Drop Off. If you want solid reasons behind it, search the strategy forum. There are long threads with detailed discussions on the comparison of these cards.

How much do you want Helpoemer to be in there? Its an interesting card, but it needs a deck thats more focused around it. The effect is difficult to get off, and you have to waste a tribute for it. I'd suggest getting rid of it completely. Kycoo could easily fill the void of dark monsters.

You can probably also remove the Marauding Captains completely. Those belong more in a Warrior focused deck. It would also lower yur monster count to 17, which is more standard these days. Some spells to consider putting in are Nobleman of Crossout, Smashing Ground, or Book of Moon.

I also noticed that you're missing Premature Burial, Call of the Haunted, and Torrential Tribute. If you have them, they're all solid cards to go into this deck.

Thats all I have for the moment. Could you check out my beast deck? The link is in my signature.

Great, I take my time to come up with this, and apparently its just another cookie cutter deck. Neways, I've Bumped you both. Now as for Helpoemer, you might be right, so ill replace 2 with one Meifeist, that should help the theme a bit. Also, I made the deck a bit more uniform with COTH, Premature, and book of moon's. I think Ill leave the M.captains, as there are lots of warriors in here, and this deck is focused around hand disruption/field advantage. Yeah, as for Time seal, Ill check the thread, but I dont see the advantage, This way, your opo would lose 1 card, be closer to exhausting their deck, and yeah, i dont see why time seal would be better. Perhaps both?! that would really help this theme, but probablly just clog things up. Neways thanks for the feedback, but I still need most of these cards so please people help!!!1

There are a couple of reasons why I prefer Time Seal.
1) Drop Off can end up sending a tribute monster to the graveyard, allowing it to be subsequently reborned.
2) Drop Off can send a light/dark monster to the graveyard that will allow BLS to be summoned.
3) Quick play spells (Book of Moon, MST, Enemy Controller, Book of Moon, etc.) can be chained to Drop Off and will essentially render Drop Off useless in that case.
4) Drop Off can only be activated in the draw phase. Time Seal can be chained to MST, Heavy Storm, etc, resulting in the opponent wasting a S/T removal card.
5) If you Drop Off a Sinister Serpent or Night Assailant, they will get those monsters back anyways (assuming there is another Assailant in their graveyard). This means you lose one card, and your opponent loses none.

Time Seal just prevents your opponent from having access to another card in every way possible for that following turn. Those are my thoughts anyways. You should still probably try to find the thread I mentioned. It goes into much more detail.

Wow Fozzo, I never considered those, shows what I know. But I have one good reason why drop off is better.

1.Its a shiny card

lol, but seriously, youve given me alot to think about, im gonna check my inventory to see how many time seals I have.

Well I thank you for rating my deck... but both of your decks I'm not sure how to touch up. One is a form of chaos control and the other is a form of Horus that isn't quite like mine.

So as much as I want to return the favor in full as you rated and fixed my lengthfully, I'm afraid the most I can do is suggest that for this deck, you ixnay on the Dark Ruler and replace it with a different dark tribute monster that fits the fray. Such as Jinzo, DMoC, or maybe Blowback Dragon.

As for a rating on this deck... I give it a 8.8/10. It's solid looking, but I don't care much for chaos anymore, especially the Envoy.

Yhanks for replying desmok, Dark ruler is there because he provides safety. When you're attacking a face down, you dont really need to worry about it with dark ruler. Neways, thanks for the bump, its allways appreciated!