I'm not that good at building decks, and I could use some pointers on my deck.

Exodia Deck


Monsters:

Exodia the Forbidden One
Left Arm of the Forbidden One
Right Arm of the Forbidden One
Left Leg of the Forbidden One
Right Leg of the Forbidden One
Witch of the Black Forest
Sangan
Mystic Tomato
Emissary of the Afterlife x2
Penguin Soldier
Spirit Reaper x2
Tribe-Infecting Virus
Magician of Faith
Nimble Momonga x3

Spells:

Monster Reborn
Harpie’s Feather Duster
Raigeki
Swords of Revealing Light
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Change of Heart
Reload
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Mystical Space Typhoon
Enemy Controller
Premature Burial
The Shallow Grave
Upstart Goblin

Traps:

Jar of Greed x2
Mirror Force
Imperial Order
Call of the Haunted
Magic Cylinder
Waboku

Thank you, and all help is appreciated.

Take out all of your traps except 2 jar of greeds and call of the haunted.Add in another jar,2 backup soldiers,and painful choice.
7/10,only because painful and backup aren't in it.

If I didn't put in the third PoG what trap do you think I should keep?

I'd say if you didn't put a third Jar of Greed in there, keep either Cylinder or Mirror Force.

Ok I'll keep Mirror Force:

Exodia Deck


Monsters(18):

Exodia the Forbidden One
Left Arm of the Forbidden One
Right Arm of the Forbidden One
Left Leg of the Forbidden One
Right Leg of the Forbidden One
Witch of the Black Forest
Sangan
Mystic Tomato
Emissary of the Afterlife x2
Penguin Soldier
Spirit Reaper x2
Tribe-Infecting Virus
Magician of Faith
Nimble Momonga x3

Spells(16):

Monster Reborn
Harpie’s Feather Duster
Raigeki
Swords of Revealing Light
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Change of Heart
Reload
Scapegoat
Dark Hole
Mystical Space Typhoon
Enemy Controller
Premature Burial
The Shallow Grave
Upstart Goblin
Painful Choice

Traps(6):

Jar of Greed x2
Call of the Haunted
Backup Soldier x2
Mirror Force

For the deck revised:
Take out tribe for another emmisary of the afterlife.

i couldnt let your deck suffer any more u wont win tomarrow if u do the deck u have right now. Exodia isnt a stall deck, its pure speed a few lifepoint damage here and there u can deal with. heres my fixes

+Emissary of the Afterlife
+Mystic Tomato
+Mystic Tomato
+Magician of Faith
+Magician of Faith
+Apprentice Magician
+Apprentice Magician
+Apprentice Magician
+Sinister Serpent/Penguin Soldier
+Jar of Greed

b4 u go this guy is crazy by putting Apprentice Magician's in just wait, he can b brought out by Mystic Tomato, adding more speed, and for even more speed he brings out MoF+MoF magic isnt bad at all not at all. So i have created wall of monsters for your opp. to break threw b4 he can touch directly to your life points

-Spirit Reaper
-Spirit Reaper
-Tribe-Infecting Virus
-Harpie’s Feather Duster
-Raigeki
-Swords of Revealing Light
-Scapegoat
-The Shallow Grave
-Enemy Controller
-Mirror Force

dont run these really i used to run exodia these cards end up dead in your hand cause u arnt attacking him, and swords isnt good cause u want your witch,sangan,mystic, and Emissary's to die in battle(excluding witch and sangan just as long as the die reason y dark hole is still in there)

i wish u gl even if u dont get all the cards u need by your tourny, next time youll b ready.

Putting in cards like apprentice magician would only keep me from getting the cards I need to get exodia. Also, I can only play one monster per turn and that would keep from the magics and traps I also need.