It's a basic Chaos deck with warrior type support with a tech...

Monsters (18):
1 x BLS
3 x D.D. Warrior Lady
1 x Shining Angel
1 x Blade Knight
1 x Magician of Faith
1 x Jinzo
1 x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 x Don Zaloog
1 x Magical Scientist
1 x Skilled Dark Magician
2 x Dark Jeroid (Tech Special)
1 x Tribe Infecting Virus
1 x Sinister Serpent
1 x Fiber Jar
1 x Exiled Force

Spells (15):
1 x Pot of Greed
1 x Smashing Ground (not sure about this, need some opinions)
1 x Painful Choice
2 x Reinforcement of the Army
1 x Forceful Sentry
1 x Confiscation
1 x Nobleman of Crossout
1 x Heavy Storm
1 x Mystical Space Typhoon
1 x Scapegoat
1 x Swords of Revealing Light
1 x Premature Burial
1 x Change of Heart
1 x Snatch Steal

Traps (7):
1 x Call of the Haunted
1 x Torrential Tribute
1 x Ring of Destruction
1 x Magic Cylinder
1 x Ceasefire
1 x Mirror Wall (Tech)
1 x Dust Tornado (main or side???)

Honestly this looks like a cookie cutter deck. Try getting some originality in the deck.

Rating:7/10

(Shinobi Deck Team)

well...what would you recommend to make it better? I'm all ears :)

All of those corrections are up to you. You have to choose what goes in and what comes out.