Any help will be appreciated!

EDITS:

-3 Pulled to the Grave
-2 Army Reinforcements (1 was over limit)
-1 Careless Avarice
-2 Shallow Grave
-1 Jowgen

+3 Pharoah's Shrine
+3 Foolish Burial
+3 Goblin Management Expert


[40] Main Deck:

[5] Monsters:

[2] Dead Controller - Jowgen
[1] Executioner Makyura
[1] Metamol Pod
[1] Cyber Pod

[21] Magics:

[1] Distressing Choice
[1] Jar of Greed
[1] Wealthy Goblin
[1] Hand Obliteration
[3] Reload
[1] Army Reinforcements
[3] Pharoah's Shrine
[3] Foolish Burial
[3] Book of Moon
[3] Book of Sun
[1] Early Burial

[15] Traps:

[2] Last Battle!
[3] Sealing Wall of Light
[3] Remains of Yatagarasu
[3] Vase of Greed
[3] Goblin Management Expert

Thanks for looking!!!

1.Army Reinforcemnts is semi restricted

2.Book of Moon isnt needed, if you can use Acid Pit Trap instead of Book of Sun, or BOTH

3.I assume you dont have Pharoah's Shrine. In Maykura's Version, u need 1-3 (ur choice) of Foolish Burial

4.Consider self destruction button since you might not have the pieces every game

Those totally slipped my mind... here's an update. Thanks!!!

your deck isn't that balanced, your spell and trap ratio to your monster ratio is way off. I'd suggest maybe overhauling your spell cards and getting rid of the ones least needed (since this is for the most part a FTK deck, you could stand to lose the shallow graves for sure) add things like MEB and Night Assailant (or whatever their names are in japan). on second thought, just take out one of the shallow graves and add a lightning vortex. after all, since you only run 6 monsters in your deck (a problem I don't have cause of my deck ratio which is 32 mons to 28 s/t cards), you need some big monster elimination cards. 8/10 not bad.

@_@ obviously u havent seen that many Japanese OTKS...

if its a FTK or OTK, monster count needs to be 5 or less, heck i even think he has too many monsters

no offense or bashing, just please learn some stuff that are unique (not necessarily fair, but unique) things before posting.....thanks

I hope he bothered to put in 3 of those Goblin Management thingies...

ok.... lets look at this for a second, you NEED monsters on the field so you don't get your butt handed to you by your opponent before you can pull off the combo of winning like that. you have to remember that you don't always go first. just because it is a FTK deck DOES NOT mean that he will always win first turn though. I suggest you atleast try to learn the basics of the game before you ever try to put down one of my deck ratings and fixes again.

that's the beauty of an FTK sonny boy... they don't always work... But they almost always work and you know why?? Cuz' unless it's a tourney, the FTK deck won't probably have to face a mirror which means that their opponent won't be able to deal 8000 damage to them on the first turn unless they too god draw... THAT altogether means that the FTK deck won't get their butt handed to them until turn 3 or sumthin... and that means 3 turns to draw the combo...

woah... calm down ppl...

1. I've kept a 7000 Wall out on the field 10+ turns many a times wich gives me PLENTY of time to do what I need to do.

2. I will be putting Goblin Managment Expert (I think that's his name) in of the 2 Shallow Graves and 1 Jowgen. I'm still waiting for it in the mail.

This is how it will look when I receive those cards. See the edit, and let me know what you think.

Thankss for the help.

Wow . . . so hard NOT to bash . . . :rolleyes:

Anyway, very cool deck dude! The updated version looks like a very fun deck. :grin:

David . . . not knowing the basics . . . *chuckling to himself*

i dont mind...this place is becoming infested with nubs and idiots who dont know half the metagame and think they are so good because their environment sucks. The point of playing a OTK is to beat someone in one turn, preferrably first turn. What am i going to do, put 1:1 ratio like all you nubs out there? LMAO

I dont need to put down your ratings, Cyberdon, because people are still viewing this forum and laughing at your ignorance because its so funny....my initial post was a suggestion. Obviously, you were too hotheaded, prideful, and ignorant to understand that.

u dont always go first, so what, win SECOND turn then. What am i going to do, play a monster and HOPE i'll draw the combo? heck you sound like one of those players that put Exodia in Beatdown decks =_=

Telling me to learn the basics......this is a quote i gotta keep......it makes so many people's day