Nice deck there! How playing UWS instead of Mage Power.
9/10

I'd say Warrior would work better because

A. Marauding Captain protects level 3
B. Command Knight makes them each 400 points stronger
C. Black Luster Soldier need I say more
D. Warriors are all around better including DD Warrior Lady to make a direct attack easier

I have a Silent Swordsman deck as well....it doesn't mix with spellcasters...Silent Swordsman negates Magic cards where as Spellcasters depend on magic manipulation...they don't go together very well...I also suggest using Monster Reincarnation, another Lv5 and maybe some Shining Angels to help drag out Lv3

An interesting take on things... I hope to play against this soon. 8./10

Link in the sig

at first glance, it looks like these two themes will clash a lot. Silent Swordsman deck with 17 spells?? that's almost half your deck...negated when your SSlv7 gets out.

You should probably drop one of the Lv7s for a Lv5...if your only lv5 gets removed from play somehow, you'll be screwed.

You also have no ways of protecting your nomi monster (SSlv7) from traps once its out. you need some kind of trap negation--royal decree if you're rich, 7 tools if you arent. I run 7 tools in my SS deck.

I don't know...i'd take out at least 4 spells and put in at least 4 traps. very original idea though.

ummmm....why gemini elf? looks like you have a spellcaster deck with the silent swordsmen in there. well, the only real suggestion i have for you without messing your concept up is:

- magic cylinder
+ call of the haunted

- ss lv7
+ ss lv5

2 lv5 is better than 2 lv7.

original, i dont know how playable it will be...8/10!

please return favor, link is in sig, thanks!