Yello, I'd appreciate some help on my newest deck. Here it is:

Total cards: 47

Monsters: 23
1x Fire Emperor Thestalos
1x Chaos Soldier - Messenger of the Beginning

3x Elemental Master Doriado
2x Manju God
2x Element Valkyrie
2x Element Devil
2x Element Dragon
2x Element Zaurus
2x Homunculus the Alchemic Being
1x Initiate Troops
1x Exclusivity Virus
1x Killer Snake
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Sage Keiroon
1x Tsukuyomi


Magics: 16
3x Doriado's Prayer
1x Mischeivous Demon Twins
1x Demon's Axe
1x Power of Teamwork
1x Forced Transfrer
1x Book of Moon
1x Scapegoats
1x Emissary of Peace
1x Jar of Greed
1x Theft
1x Angel's Donation
1x Smashing Ground
1x Emissary of Obliteration
1x Early Burial


Traps: 8
3x Weathering Volcano
1x Mirror Force
1x Bell of Destruction
1x Tidal Wave
1x Cry of the Living Dead
1x Forced Ejection Machine

All reviews appreciated (except flames)

ok make it a monarch deck beacuse there the true forces of nature cause the can kill anything within there path and make it an equal amout of fire water rock and light monster in this deck but anyway its not really a bad deck but like i said just make it a monarch deck and get rid of the envoy of the beginning

Try Messenger of Peace to give you enough time to bring out what you need. 9/10 Plz check out my sigged deck.