Monsters: 17

x2 Vampire Lord
x2 Ryu Kokki
x1 Despair From The Dark
x3 Pyramid Turtle
x3 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower
x2 Giant Rat
x1 Mystic Tomato
x1 Sangan
x1 Tribe Infecting Virus
x1 Cyber Jar

Spells: 19

x3 Book of Life
x2 Creature Swap
x2 Call of the Mummy
x2 Nobleman of Crossout
x1 Snatch Steal
x1 Premature Burial
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon
x1 Giant Trunade
x1 Heavy Storm
x1 Reload
x1 Pot of Greed
x1 Graceful Charity
x1 Swords of Revealing Light
x1 Question

Traps: 7

x2 Compulsory Evacuation Device
x1 Torrential Tribute
x1 Bottomless Trap Hole
x1 Dust Tornado
x1 Ceasefire
x1 Call of the Haunted

Total: 43

-cyber jar
-mystic tomato
and make the deck 40 cards

I might take out the Mystic Tomato, but I'm not sure about the Cyber Jar.

the d3eck looks fine you should take out the swaps though and the reason why is it will slow the deck down a little

my oppion is to
- mystic tomato
+ spirit reaper
this should help the deck alot

-1 Despair from the Dark (he's better in the side deck)
-3 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower (its effect is a watered down Spirit Reaper combined with midgety deck destruction)
-1 Call of the Mummy (2 gives you alot of dead draws)
-1 Reload
-1 Mystic Tomato
-2 Waboku
+1 Exiled Force (he's Rat-able)
+2 Spirit Reaper
+2 Scapegoat
+2 Bottomless Trap Hole

This should give the deck a tougher lineup of defense & removal & prevent your opponent from stopping the Zombie's swarm capabilities.

But that's basically what this deck is supposed to do..... I've got Vampire Lord that I can get with Turtle as a special summon while having Soul Absorbing Bone Tower on the field, making them lose 2, 4, or 6 cards off the top of their deck then When I atk with Vampire they lose another card out of their deck.. That's why there's So many reborn cards in this deck as well.