Please rate my deck and feel free to make in comments on how to improve my deck and i'll do the same for you.

Monsters:
familiar knight
red-eye's darkness dragon
mirage dragon
masked dragon x2
luster dragon#2
luster dragon x2
element dragon
rare metal dragon
blue eye's white dragon x3
armed dragon lv3
armed dragon lv5
lava golem
black tyrano
vampire lord
red eyes black chick
red eyes black dragon
twin headed behemoth
spirit ryu
seiyaryu
kaiser glider
y-dragon head
x-head cannon
z-metal tank
divine dragon ragnarok
paladin of white dragon
different dimension dragon
lord of D.
kaiser sea horse
berserk dragon

Fusion Monsters:
xyz dragon cannon
yz tank dragon
xy dragon cannon
xz tank cannon
lord dragun

Magic:
flute of summoning dragon x2
swords of revealing light
white dragon ritual
meteor of destruction
a deal with dark ruler
monster reborn
a feather of the phoenix
scapegoat
question
polymerization
pot of greed
graceful charity
heavy storm

Traps:
burst breath
phoenix wing wind blast
threatening roar
dragons rage
skull dice
judgement of anubis
shadow spell

Damn... cut down on the monsters.
Cut these out...
masked dragon x2
luster dragon#2
element dragon
rare metal dragon
blue eye's white dragon x3
armed dragon lv3
lava golem
black tyrano
vampire lord
red eyes black chick
red eyes black dragon
spirit ryu
seiyaryu
y-dragon head
x-head cannon
z-metal tank
divine dragon ragnarok
paladin of white dragon
different dimension dragon
berserk dragon

Add in a few spear dragons and maybe some horus dragons. 18 monsters should be good enough.

check out my deck, please....

-Dum

Way to many monsters: run about 16-18

Monsters:
familiar knight
-red-eye's darkness dragon
mirage dragon
masked dragon x2
-luster dragon#2
luster dragon x2
-element dragon
-rare metal dragon
-blue eye's white dragon x2
-armed dragon lv3
-armed dragon lv5
-lava golem
-black tyrano
vampire lord
-red eyes black chick
-red eyes black dragon
twin headed behemoth
-spirit ryu
-seiyaryu
-kaiser glider
-y-dragon head
-x-head cannon
-z-metal tank
-divine dragon ragnarok
-paladin of white dragon
different dimension dragon
lord of D.
kaiser sea horse
-berserk dragon

Fusion Monsters:
xyz dragon cannon
yz tank dragon
xy dragon cannon
xz tank cannon
lord dragun

Magic:
flute of summoning dragon x2
swords of revealing light
-white dragon ritual
-meteor of destruction
-a deal with dark ruler
monster reborn
a feather of the phoenix
scapegoat
question
-polymerization
pot of greed
graceful charity
heavy storm

Traps:
burst breath
phoenix wing wind blast
threatening roar
dragons rage
-skull dice
-judgement of anubis
-shadow spell

Add in monsters like:

Tyrant dragon
Luster Dragon #1
Grey Wing
Fulsilier~machine but helps dragons
put in waboku X2
Graceful Charity
Pot of greed
Prematuer Burial
Call of the Haunted

I figured most people would tell me to cut down on monsters. But i'm not very good with strategy so i designed my deckk with alot of powerfull dragons so they could overwelm my opponent one after the other, and so far it's worked pretty well.

you should cut out the following monsters:

familiar knight
lava golem
black tyrano
vampire lord
kaiser glider
y-dragon head
x-head cannon
z-metal tank

Fusions:
xyz dragon cannon
yz tank dragon
xy dragon cannon
xz tank cannon

make this a true dragon deck.

7/10. rate mine if you get the chance, the link is in my sig.

Well I guess theres a lot of changes to make I'll just make general ideas and explai nwhy.

Lower the MOnster Count: Monsters unlike other cards have the problem built into them that you can only play one a turn. So in a deck of many monsters you'll have a bunch of cards that cannot be used at the moment.

Lower Deck Count: Every Deck I make I try to have exactly forty cards and this is so I ahve a higher chance of drawing my stronger cards.

Let me try and make the deck a Red Eyes Deck.

Monsters: 17
REBD x 3
REB Chick x 3
Mirage Dragon x 2
Sangan x 1
Sinister Serpent x 1
twin HEaded Behemeoth x 1
Double Ghoston x 2
Tribe-Infecting Virus x 1
Masked Dragon x 3

Magic: 16
Pot OF greed x 1
Graceful Charity x 1
Delinquent Duo x 1
Scapegoat x 2
Nobleman of Crossout x 2
Inferno Fire Blast x 2
Card Destruction x 1
Heavy Storm x 1
Mystical Space Typhoon x 1
Swords of Revealing Light x 1
Creature Swap x 2
Smashing Ground x 1

Traps:7
Ceasefire x 1
Mirror FOrce x 1
Torrential Tribute x 1
ring of Destruction x 1
Call of The Haunted x 1
Dust Tornado x 1
Bottomless Trap Hole x 1