!! Black Luster Soldier : Envoy of the Beginning !!
!! Vampire Lord !!
!! Vampire Lord !!
!! Pyramid Turtle !!
!! Pyramid Turtle !!
!! Pyramid Turtle !!
!! Spirit Reaper !!
!! Spirit Reaper !!
!! Sangan !!
!! Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer !!
!! Breaker the Magical Warrior !!
!! Different Dimension Warrior Lady !!
!! Blade Knight !!
!! Magician of Faith !!
!! Magician of Faith !!
!! Tribe Infecting Virus !!
!! Sinister Serpent !!


Spells (_17_)

!! Pot of Greed !!
!! Graceful Charity !!
!! Scapegoat !!
!! Creature Swap !!
!! Creature Swap !!
!! Lightning Vortex !!
!! Snatch Steal !!
!! Premature Burial !!
!! Book of Life x2!!
!! Nobleman of Crossout x2!!
!! Enemy Controller !!
!! Enemy Controller !!
!! Mystical Space Typhoon !!
!! Heavy Storm !!
!! Delinquent Duo !!





Traps (_7_)

!! Ring of Destruction !!
!! Torrential Tribute !!
!! Call of the Haunted !!
!! Dust Tornado !!
!! Mirror Force !!
!! Bottomless Trap Hole !!
!! Bottomless Trap Hole !!



Thos are my changes hmm.. Great deck.

I don't know about the rest of your deck, but your monster line-up is the exact same of one of the Los Angelous SJ top eight decks.

It's not a good idea to copy their decks at all. I don't mean since it's un-original, but the person who made that deck made it for his perticular style of play. Thats why he made it to top eight. ;)

If all else, give credit where credit is due.

As for the suggestions,

I would drop a Blade Knight. I mean honestly, it serves no purpose here. The only time I would recommend it is an a warrior type deck.

In it's place this deck would benefit from a Magical Merchant. It's starting to see alot more play, and it can help out alot in a deck like this. It can send your serpents V. Lords,etc. to the graveyard to save you from potentially bad top-decks. And you get a spell/trap card. Isn't that better than a beatstick? Of course it is.

Next drop one Pyramid Turtle. You may argue "But it helps me fetch more zombies!". And well, in all reality this isn't an actual zombie deck. Its more of a Zombie-Chaos hybrid.You only run 7 zombies. A third Pyramid Turtle is kind of pointless. And in a lot of cases you'll have used your 2 Spirit Reapers and 2 L. Lords before you get all your Pyramid Turtles, which could reslut in you topping one with nothing to fetch with it, which would really suck. Without it, it drops you to 40. Which is a more solid number in this format.

The rest of the monsters look fine really, I would play a DMoC in this deck if I were you, but thats just preference. It works for some people, and it doesn't work for others, I can't decide how it will work for you.

The spells are alright, but 2 Creature Swaps is really overkill. Take one out, and add in a Metamorphasis. These are just great in zombies. You can morph goats, Magician's of Faith, Magical Merchant (lvl1), Sinister Serpent, Vampire Lord, and even Black Luster Soldier. Why wouldn't you run it?

2 Enemy Controllers is decent, with one Creature Swap already I wouldn't necessarily advise it, but if it works for you keep it. If you find a second Enemy Controller doesn't work that well, then a second Metamorphasis would be good.

The last card in your spell line-up should be Book of Moon.

The traps are good, except you should take out Dust Tornado. Its not really worth it. You don't need to waste that trap slot of m/t removal. You have enough already. I don't really have any suggestions for replacing it, except maybe a spell card like Meta or something that works for you.

If your planning on going to any tournaments, smart people will side-deck against you. Most likely they'll be putting in 3 D.D. Assailants and a Return From A Different Dimension. With that said you'll obviously be having alot of your monsters removed from play. Your Vampire Lords will most likely be their main targets, so side-decking in a couple D.D. Assailants, and a Return From A Different Dimension of your own would probally help. It just depends on how you play your cards.

Btw, please return the favor with the deck in my sig. Thanks.
-Nightmare

Anymore fixes people, I need more input please :(..