hi i need help with this deck okay here it is

tributes
1 dark ruler ha das
1 earl of dimise
1 guardian guarl
1 dark necrofear
blowback dragon

monsters 4 stars and under
wall of illusion
eleminet doom
dark mimic lv 3
sangan
second goblin
la jinn
bistro butcher
brain jacker
giant orc
dark jeroid
melchid the four faced beast
familiar knight
shadowslayer x2
grand tici elder
kuriboh
guardian ceal x2
guardian kayest x1
guardian tryce

spells
axe of despair
shooting star bow seal x2
gravity axe grual x2
pot of greed
mystical space typoon
nobleman of crossout
premature burial
swords of revealing light
snatch steal
rod of silence- kayest
heavy storm
twin swords of flashing light tryce
fairy meteor cursh
spirit message a
spiritn message i
spirit message n
spirit message l
traps
magic jammer
attack and receive x2
creasefire
pheonix wing wind blast
call of hte haunted
torential tribute
skull invintation
rope of life
destiny board

okaY RATE AND FIX PLEASE

Interesting deck.
First problem with it: Guardian Tryce is a 5 star monster. Just telling you.

Where's Guardian Baou? Use three of those ####ers for sure. Take out Grarl and Kay'est. Put in 2 Goblin Kings. The rest looks fine.