U may or may not have seen my previous deck but this is the improved version. Plz r/f. I appreciate it.

Fusion Monsters

King Dragun
Dark Blade the Dragon Knight

Ritual Monsters

Paladin on White Dragon x2

Tribute Monsters

Blue Eyes White Dragon x3
Horus the Black flame Dragon LV6
Luster Dragon #2

Non-Tribute Monsters

Magician of Faith
Twin Headed Behemoth
Luster Dragon x3
Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV4 x2
Cyber Jar
Witch of the Black Forest
The Dark - Hex-Sealed Fusion x2
Lord of D. x2
Dark Blade x2

Spell Cards

Stamping Destruction
Mystical Space Typhoon
White Dragon Ritual x2
The Flute of Summoning Dragon x2
Change of Heart
Dark Hole
Monster Reborn
The Forceful Sentry
Axe of Despair
Malevolent Nuzzler

Trap Cards

Magic Jammer
Seven Tools of the Bandit
Bottomless Trap Hole
Call of the Haunted
Covering Fire
Draining Shield

Total 40 cards. (42 if Fusion monsters are included.)

PLZ tell me what you think.

I spent a while trying this to get it to work but now no-one will rate it or improve it... PLZ, I beg of you.

You're using banned cards, so I'm going to fix it as such.

King Dragun x3
Dark Blade the Dragon Knight x3


Paladin on White Dragon x2
Blue Eyes White Dragon x3
Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6
Jinzo
Fusilier Dragon, The Dual-Mode Beast x2
Magician of Faith x2
Twin Headed Behemoth
Luster Dragon x3
Cave Dragon x2
Cyber Jar
Witch of the Black Forest

Stamping Destruction
Mystical Space Typhoon
White Dragon Ritual x2
Metamorphosis x2
Change of Heart
Dark Hole
Monster Reborn
The Forceful Sentry
Snatch Steal
Raigeki
Burst Stream of Destruction
D Duo

Bottomless Trap Hole x2
Call of the Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Ring of Destruction

Sorry, I use Traditional Format as I don't participate in Tourneys and stuff. I only duel with my mates. If I ever get Manju, I'll gladly put Burst Stream straight in but not until then. Thanks for the help anyway.

Okay, first tell me whether you want to play advanced or traditional format. With out this information, I can't do much with your deck. Some of the cards in your deck are banned in the advanced format. Sorry, I didn't see your previous post.

Hmm...let's see what we can do.

If you are going to use horus, add Horus LV8 as well. LV6 will allow you to summon LV8 if you have the card. If not, maybe remove your horus cards for spear dragons and another decent dragon beat stick such as luster dragon #2.

Please remove the flute of summoning dragons. With out lord of d. in your deck, they are dead weight. Use cards like heavy storm, raigeki, or lightning vortex instead. If you are going for dragon spells and traps, use burst breath and wing beat of giant dragon. Take out malevolent nuzzler and put in equips like another axe of despair, united we stand, or metamorphsis. These will work better.

I would consider sticking to a theme for this dragon deck. Some of your fusion and ritual monster seem to clash in your deck. Just a suggestion from one dragon duelist to another.

Lindsay

I'm sorry if you missed them but I do have 2 Lord of D.s in this deck. Thanks for the other tips though. You mentioned a few cards which I used before but took out and I am now wondering whether to include them or not because u seem very experienced. Thanks for your help!

Does anyone have any other ways I can improve this deck?

Ditch the Luster Dragon #2 in favor of Jinzo, or, if you really wana stick with just dragons, Kaiser Glider.