Monsters: 12

[1] Jinzo
[1] Summoned Skull

[3] Gemini Elf
[2] Skilled Dark Magician
[1] Injection Fairy Lily
[1] The Fiend Megacyber
[1] Witch of the Black Forest
[1] Spirit Reaper
[1] Soul Tiger (might replace with cyber jar)

Magics : 16

[1] Pot of Greed
[1] Graceful Charity
[1] Fissure
[1] Raigeki
[1] Snatch Steal
[1] Nobleman of Crossout
[1] Change of Heart
[1] Premature Burial
[1] Axe of Despair (looking for a mage)
[1] Harpie's Feather Duster
[1] Mystical Space Typhoon
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] Monster Reborn
[1] Monster Reincarnation
[1] Dark Hole
[1] United We Stand

Traps : 12

[1] Call of the Haunted
[1] Ring of Destruction
[1] Dust Tornado
[1] Mirror Force
[1] Torrential Tribute
[1] Imperial Order
[1] Trap Hole
[1] Magic Drain
[1] Compulsory Evacuation Device
[1] Waboku
[1] Solemn Judgement
[1] Assault on GHQ

Rate/Fix with complete honesty; Holding back only keeps me from progressing as a better player. Thanks in advance.

Ok, you have a good idea, but some of your cards you have are not tourney legal, also, you are running too many traps for a Jinzo. He is a nice card, but everyone uses him, it is not fun if everyone uses the same cards. Here are the fixes that I would do. Hope it helps.

Monsters: 20

[1] Dark Ruler Ha Des
[1] Summoned Skull

[3] Gemini Elf
[1] Skilled Dark Magician
[1] Injection Fairy Lily
[3] Goblin Attack Force
[3] Giant Orc
[3] Spear Dragon
[3] Beserk Gorilla
[1] Cyber Jar

Magics : 13

[1] Pot of Greed
[1] Graceful Charity
[1] Lightning Vortex
[1] Snatch Steal
[2] Nobleman of Crossout
[1] Premature Burial
[3] Axe of Despair
[1] Mystical Space Typhoon
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] Monster Reincarnation

Traps : 7

[1] Call of the Haunted
[1] Ring of Destruction
[1] Mirror Force
[1] Magical Cylinder
[1] Torrential Tribute
[1] Seven Tools of the Bandit
[1] Magic Jammer

Well, it's not that good. Seeing that you are using banned cards, not sure where you can play them. Too many traps, not enough monsters, using IO, don't need Magic Drain. There are FAR BETTER beat sticks than Skilled Dark Magician, Soul Tiger is for defense...only.

5/10....sorry.

I edited your deck, if you would like to see my beat down deck here is the link.
I hope this will help you get an idea for what a beatstick is supposed to be. Mind you mine is not perfect, but if you look at the cards you will see why they are all there.


http://www.yugiohrealms.com/forum/sh...d.php?t=421468

Okay I'll do this Traditional...............Put the lime in the coke