this is my chaos cookie, i figure i play cookie and chaos why not try my hand at both

tribs special summoning
x2 vampire lord
Black luster soldier- envoy of the beginning
airknight parshath

monsters
x2 magician of faith
x3 pyrimid turtle
x2 spirit reaper
ddwl
breaker the magical warrior
tribe infecting virus
x2 blade knight

magics
x2 book of moon
x2 nobleman of crossout
x2 scape goat
x2 book of life
x2 enemy controler
pot of greed
graceful charity
delinquint duo
mystical space typhoon
heavy storm
premature burial
snatch steal
lightning vortex

traps
x2 bottomless trap hole
mirror force
ring of destruction
torrential tribute
call of the haunted

Good deck but if you get your Magician Crossed out, your light options get shot, not to mention losing Apprentice 2nd effect. Try without an Apprentice and 1 Magician and replace with another Blade Knight and Airknight. With Spirit Reaper, you'll pretty much have a monster out their for a good 3-5 turns which makes it an easy monster to be Tributed. I don't and will NEVER run Zombies (even if V.Lord is unrestriced, and can be played to 3!!!!!!), so I may be wrong on this, but take out a Book of Life for something else... Like E.Controller! Also, if your looking for side advice look at what I gave to OZZY465. Good luck with your deck and drop a line to my Long Beach Regional deck. Thanks...

I Run A Very Similiar Deck Try This
-magician Of Faith 2 Is Enought
+blade Knight U Need More Lights
-book Of Life One Is Enought

Good Luck ...

Yo running out of time to sleep so I'll rate your deck in detail tomorrow anyway good deck... Will diesect later!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks guys, yeah my light to dark ratio is horrible. i might try airknight but what to take out for him. i am gonna revamp it tonight(pun inteneded) then i will get back with you guys.