please fix rate nd if u have cards that would help me ill gladly trade u!

Monsters (17):
1x Jinzo
3x Beserk Gorilla
2x Enraged Battle Ox
2x Slate Warrior
1x Sangan
1x D.D Warrior Lady
1x D.D Assailant
1x Injection Fairy Lily
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Tribe Infecting Virus
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Sinister Serpent
1x Magician of Faith

Spells:
2x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Book of Moon
2x Smashing Ground
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Heavy Storm
1x Pot of Greed
1x Snatch Steal
1x Graceful Charity
1x Premature Burrial
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Scapegoat
TOTAL SPELLS: 14

Traps:
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Ring of Destruction
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Compulsory Evacuation Device
1x Dust Tornado
1x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Solemn Judgement
TOTAL TRAPS: 9

TOTAL CARDS:40

Side Deck:
3x Nimble Momonga
1x Book of Moon
1x Neko Mane King
1x Prickle Fairy
1x Tsukuyomi
1x Mystik Wok
1x Blast With Chain
1x Curse of Darkness
1x Waboku
1x Seven Tools of the Bandit
1x Spell Shield Type-8
2x Compulsory Evacuation Device

NEEDS:
Enemy Controller
Pot of Greed (DB1 HOLO)

Please Rate it and check my h/w list if you want to trade something for my needs thanks!

somebody please help me fix and rate this deck i will rate/fix yours in return

It's a definite beat down deck, very solid....9 out of 10

thanks!

anybody have breaker i need him bad...i got bottomless so i dnt need it anymore..

please help me fix/ rate my deck

Not really much to fix. Nice deck. I give it about an 8 out of 10

thanks...

there must be something i can do if its only an 8 out of 10 lol

hummm suggestons?

I have earth chant if you want to trade for it Chaosskillz.
It special summons any earth type monster if you tribute a monster/s with the same amount of stars.

no thanks i got 5 of those nd i wouldnt use it in my deck cuz all of them r 4 stars or less thanks for offer please rate my deck/ fix

to me, i have beat downs myself, although i usually win tourneys with my control. heres my suggestion, take out stalk + control cards for beat down cards

earth beat down = 3 of each below
berserk
bazoo
enraged

and one chiron and exiled force

+ 3 x return from different dimension, thaz the basic idea it works for me!