This isn't my deck, rather, it was passed by me for review for a friend; please give me feedback on it. Thanks.

Count: 40

Monsters: 17
Tribute:
Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
Thunder Dragon
Thunder Dragon
Thunder Dragon

Non-Tribute:
Legendary Jujitsu Master
Legendary Jujitsu Master
Magical Merchant
Magician of Faith
Magician of Faith
Mask of Darkness
Mask of Darkness
Night Assailant
Night Assailant
Sinister Serpent
Tsukuyomi
Tsukuyomi
Tsukuyomi

Spells: 15
Back to Square One
Back to Square One
Book of Moon
Book of Moon
Delinquent Duo
Graceful Charity
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Messenger of Peace
Messenger of Peace
Monster Reincarnation
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Crossout
Pot of Greed

Traps: 8
Drop Off
Drop Off
Mirror Force
Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
Solemn Judgment
Solemn Judgment
Solemn Judgment

Side Deck: 15
Airknight Parshath
Blade Knight
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Call of the Haunted
D. D. Warrior Lady
Des Wombat
Dust Tornado
Magic Cylinder
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Premature Burial
Ring of Destruction
Sangan
Snatch Steal
Torrential Tribute
Tribe-Infecting Virus

Ok i prefer that Solemn Judgement should taken out for Call of the Haunted, Torrential Tribute and Ring of Destruction..

Time Seal > Drop Off that is good in this deck.............

Besides that your deck looks solid

Check my deck out in my sig....

Yeah it's a pretty solid deck and i'm surprised that call of the haunted, Torrential Tribute and ring of destruction aren't in your main deck. You should also main deck Airknight Parshath Because of the amount of people who run scape goat now a days. So:
-solemn Judgement x3- Half of your life points aren't worth it
+ring of destruction
+Call of the haunted
+Torrential tribute
-mask of darkness x1
+Airknight Parshath