-=magics=-

goats
goats
swap
swap
controller
controller
controller
delinquent
crossout
crossout
premature
heavy
vortex
snatch
pot
graceful
space

-=monsters=-
tomato
tomato
tomato
kycoo
kycoo
don
don
don
tribe
breaker
exiled
sinister
sangan
spirit
spirit
spirit
airknight
airknight

-=traps=-
sakuretsu
magic drain
magic drain
magic drain
bottomless
bottomless
call
ring
torrential
mirror

take the 2 sakuretsu, exiled, and 1 tomato, add 2 Magicians of Faith and 2 Apprentice Magicians. re-use those magics.

8/10, nice

ill think about the faiths but y should i take out exiled?

Exiled force can sometimes be a wasted summon for the turn.
Overall 9/10!

yes he can b a waste but also he can save ur ##### ### and not b a waste against something o i dono lets say BLS for example yes he works quite nicley against BLS and also can u say wat u would do to help my deck out

anybody got anything else?
hmmm guess not
guess this deck is perfect if i put in the magicians

zach add a byser shock or 2 to help keep those pesky mirror forces away from you.

exiled isn't needed in the deck, 3 controller, 2 swaps/goats = killer combo, and snatch. if you still don't want to take out exiled, then i you'll be making your deck 1 card bigger. and you don't need to do that.

i think ill keep him in cuz he kills watever i want dead unlike enemys or snatch

All I can really see is:

-2 Sakuretsu
+2 Smashing

This is to give you the ability to remove a threat right away to attack with DonZ or whatever instead of having to wait for it to attack. You have enough traps as is. Smashing should help.

try ditching a drop and the 2 sakertsus for Ceasefire, and either 2 Mirror Walls or 2 Rush Recklessly, let em feel the wrath of don

yea bit if my opponent has a monkey and a MOF on the feild and i want the monkey dead i cant kill it with smashing ground cuz its weak def

rushes and walls are too situational and if they attack my don with a BLS then mirrow wall or rush will not save him and plus they make horrible top decks if i have nothing else

well let's see the Sak vs. Mirror Wall for a sec, both Sak and MW are vulnerable to your Mobii and Breaker, SA will destroy on the spot that BLS sure, its more of a guaruntee, no removal and ATK doesn't matter, MW ATK matters sorta, but only really against BLS, BLS would go to 1500 anyway so only Dons at risk, Kycoos have fun, DD's would still remove but you'd still be getting your effects anyway and they'd field advantage as well.

so normally i would say yeah SA over MW but you also have to take in that you already have 3 BTH and the staples as well, you also have 5 monsters that see effects when damage is dealt, hell even reaper might get a chance with the Walls. see how they'd fit now?

finally the damage step, no Books or anything for them to chain and keep their monster, its a mean surprise.

ive tried walls and they never really helped when i needed them most and i always got stuck with them whm tey wouldnt have helped me and plus like i said before they make horrible top decks unlike sakuretsus