Here's the updated version. Let me know what you think.

16 monsters
x3 needle worm
x3 spirit reaper
x2 night assailant
x2 tsukuyomi
x2 magician of faith
morphing jar
morphing jar #2
sangan
cyber jar

17 spells
x3 book of taiyou
x3 book of moon
level limit area B
messenger of peace
gravekeeper's servant
stumbling
heavy storm
mystical space typhoon
graceful charity
card destruction
delinquent duo
pot of greed
the dark door

8 traps
x2 magic drain
x2 drop off
x2 gravity bind
magical thorn
coffin seller

C'mon ppl. I know you're out there. Lend me a hand here. Somebody, Anybody!

:disappoin
Could some plz rate/fix my deck plz.....

C'mon, it can't be that bad....

take out the magical thorns. they're not as good as ppl think. add a couple morphing jar #2s. they're mean, i mean, really mean. especially if you've got a lot of monsters. like you do.

- 3 magical thorns
+ 2 morphing jar #2 and mirror force

doing this will help a lot, no rate.

That sounds like a good idea. I wanted to put morphing jar #2 in before but couldn't find room for them. I'll give it a try.

PLEASE RATE/FIX MY DECK!!!!

HERE'S THE UPDATED VERSION AGAIN:

16 monsters
x3 needle worm
x3 spirit reaper
x2 night assailant
x2 tsukuyomi
x2 magician of faith
morphing jar
morphing jar #2
sangan
cyber jar

17 spells
x3 book of taiyou
x3 book of moon
level limit area B
messenger of peace
gravekeeper's servant
stumbling
heavy storm
mystical space typhoon
graceful charity
card destruction
delinquent duo
pot of greed
the dark door

8 traps
x2 magic drain
x2 drop off
x2 gravity bind
magical thorn
coffin seller

I'm sorry this is a good old fashion deckout deck but the problem is this is no Mill deck so I really can't say much

Nice Deck 7/10

Check my deck out in my sig.......

K if your going with hand/deck disruption this might help you out a bit:
+ level limit area B
+ gravekeeper's servant
- stumbling
- the dark door
- messenger of peace

+ magic drain
+ ring of destruction (this will get any annoying creture out of the way)
+ torrential tribute (how is this card not in?)
- magical thorn (your not running a burning deck)
- coffin seller (see magical thorn)

Cut the Cyber jar and add another Morphing Jar #2 . Side Spell Shield Type 8 and consider yourself abusing Hiro Shadow Scout... Also Try V-lord and brain conrol

can u r/f my deck... It's Time. Link in the sig