yo i just built this deck plz tell me what is wrong with it... and if there are amazingly nething good with it plz tell me...

main idea is to fill the field with low levelled monsters and have gravity bind activated.then beat down the foe with them.

if that doesnt work then i can do a bit of tributing and equipping cards.

finally if i am being completely owned i have the combo...

soul absorption > inferno tempest > return from a different dimension > 4 of my strongest cards and gren maju de eiza.

during all the strategies are taking place i will hopefully have soul absorption and soul demolition on the field so that i gain 500 lp each turn, power up my gran majo de eiza, and remove a card from opponents side of the field.
... heres the card list...

monster cards: 26
mad dog of darkness
neo the magic swordsman
summoned skull
ryu-kishin powered
ryu-kishin powered
opticlops
la jinn
la jinn
mystical elf
dark magician
rogue doll
rogue doll
vorse raider (kaiba 2 jap structure deck) 1900 atk 1200 def 4 star
gran maju da eiza
scorcerer of dark magic
double coston
royal magical library
dark ruler ha des
spear cretin
lava golem
chaos necromancer
chaos scorcerer
the bistro butcher
sangan
sangan
witch of the black forest

spell cards: 11
soul absorption
D.D borderline
Soul Exchange
Soul Exchange
Dark factory of mass production
Gravity axe
Gravity axe
tribute doll
monster reborn
inferno tempest
mystic plasma zone

traps: 5
mask of restrict
return from a different dimension
gravity bind
gravity bind
soul demolition

total:42

Only one Sangan is allowed, witch of the black forest is banned! also, Pof Of Greed and Graceful Charity should be in every deck!

ok ive taken out witch of the black forest and 1 sangan and have also added pot of greed and gracefull charity.

It lacks a real theme, all it has is a list of 'what if" 's....i can help you choose a theme if you want, then we can work from there on building you a deck

Too many monsters, try and find a theme, for it......... as I can see your leaning to make an all out dark deck................ first ill give you a good ratio of monsters/spells/traps that would benefit for your sake............ ratio should be in the lines of 17/17/6 - 17/16/7, thats a good enough ratio........ further more try not to put a lot of cards without a real purpose in (ie, Bistro Butcher, Infernal Tempest, Soul Demolition, Gravity Axe (I mean WHAT??) etc.)..........

Next lots of non-effect monsters won't cut it, try finding good effect dark monsters which fit your theme (in this case were looking for a dark deck theme......... good monsters which go along with this are (ie, Newdoria, Breaker, Jinzo etc.)...........

Last but not least, as stated earlier, Sangan is restricted to 1 and if you wish to play advanced you'll need to take out Witch........... cheers

1. this is a deck that is created to over power the field during the beginning of the duel for a quick and easy win. it is full of dark monsters because theyre effects are very helpfull on helping me acheive my target.

2. in my eyes spell and trap cards cannot help defeat an opponent so thats why there are hardly any spell cards in the deck.

3. bistro butcher is a 4 star card with 1800 attack. thats why he is in the deck. i know his effect can be quite rubbish but i can place the opponent in difficult positions. (card destruction ect. ect).

4. inferno tempest rocks. i only use it when return from a different dimension is on the field or when soul absorption is activated (whats like almost all the time).

5. soul demolition is very helpfull expecially when soul absorption is activated. and it also helps me power up my gran maji da eiza.

6. gravity axe is also helpfull (i need to copy that word). it prevents opponents monsters switching battle positions. so they are in trouble when i send out a higher levelled monster.

7. the non effect monsters are helpfull because they have a high attack for easy beat down on the opponent. i send out la jinn, activate mystic plasma zone
and whola laa jinns attack is now 2300 in the 1st turn. it is also helpfull to have most types of cards in a deck just incase the opponent has a set strategy that involves one type (non - spellcasting area ect.ect).

8.I HATE JINZO!!! dont ask why because i dont know. jinzo / envoy of the end two of the most hated cards in the game. no i havent lost to someone using them because of their ''power'' or anything i just hate card effects that effect you aswell.

if you summon a jinzo it stops the opponent from using trap cards (yay!) but it also effects you (noo!) in otherwords your no where better than when you summoned it.. altho it still gets to be one of the top single tribute monsters.

envoy of the end is also annoying... you remove a light and a dark monster from the field to special summon it (yay) till that point this card is ace untill it comes down to its effect

pay 1000 life points to send all cards on the field and in both players hands to the graveyard. inflict 300 points of damage per card sent to the graveyard to your opponent...
how much help is that? all it would do is take off about 2100 lp off your opponent
and you opponent has a nice opportunity for an open attack to your lifepoints. (so you will loose about another 1500 unless your opponent has a monster reborn on the field or something in which you will loose around 3000) + the 1000 for the effect cost.
so on your next turn you would have lost around 3500 and your opponent would have lost around 21000 :ermm:

ok stiggie, time to recorrect what you said

1. this is a deck that is created to over power the field during the beginning of the duel for a quick and easy win. it is full of dark monsters because theyre effects are very helpfull on helping me acheive my target.

2.with just monsters yor deck will fail, however, with just spells yor deck could still do well, look at it hat way and add some

3. Use Mad dog of darkness and other acrds like that

4. inferno tempest is very situational, they have to have a 3000 beatstick on the field (cough, BLS) so thats, one card in your deck versus one card in their deck.....hmm, no chance

5. soul demolition is very helpfull expecially when soul absorption is activated. and it also helps me power up my gran maji da eiza.

6. UWS offers a much larger atk increase, wicked breaking flamberge offers a better effect, fairy metero crush does as well, etc.

7. Use bigger beatsticks wih no effects then.....or try zombrya the dark and such

8.I love JINZO!!! small price to pay for total pwnage

if you summon a jinzo it stops the opponent from using trap cards (yay!) but it also effects you (noo!) a good duelist will use jinzo at the times when it willl hut the opponent the most and you the least

envoy of the end is also annoying... you remove a light and a dark monster from the field to special summon it (yay) till that point this card is ace untill it comes down to its effect which is also amazing

pay 1000 life points to send all cards on the field and in both players hands to the graveyard. inflict 300 points of damage per card sent to the graveyard to your opponent...
thats around 3000 - 5000 damage to ur opponent, + r both topdecking so your opponent would be luck to draw anything good to finish you off, also you cud send wotbf using EOTE's effect to bring out yata and cause a yata lock, leading to u also winning the game

The bistro butcher? If any card I have ever said is horrible it's that thing.
you can do better even gearfried is a improvment.

monster cards: 18
gren maju da eiza
vorse raider
skilled dark magician
skilled dark magician
skilled dark magician
mystical elf
dark magician
magician of faith
magician of faith
spear cretin
spear cretin
cannon soldier
dark ruler ha des
royal magicial library
royal magical library
royal magical library
chaos scorcerer
sangan

spell cards: 16
dimension fusion
soul absorption
card destruction
Soul Exchange
snatch steal
Dark factory of mass production
mystical space typhoon
heavy storm
mystic plasma zone
pot of greed
graceful charity
emergency provisions
giant trunade
soul release
soul release
soul release


traps: 6
d.d. dynamite
torrential tribute
return from a different dimension
pineapple blast
call of the haunted
soul demolition

This deck should now be more competitive against warrior chaos useing some classic monster themes.

just like to point out a few things to do with your points

number 1. You say your deck is to overpower people in the first few turns for an easy win, but how can you do that by using cards like errr..... ryu-kishin powered and roguedoll

get some better low level powerhouses like a breaker (yay!!) and Berserk Gorillas (Double yay!!) if you wanna beat you opponent to a pulp

Number 2. Taking up from ventriloquist, an all monster deck WILL FAIL!! face it with all the useful trap and magics today you can not win, you get your strongest monster to the field and they snatch steal it your........ done for try adding call of the haunted (Structure Deck), Magic Cylinder (IOC Varient) and Ring Of Destruction (IOC Varient), and as for magics add Premature Burial (Common), Snatch Steal (Structure)

Number 8. Jinzo is one of the most useful cards for a tactical attack, summon him and the only real cards that can stop you are scapegoats, book of moon (the killer) and Enemy Controller, he is one of the ultimate kill cards

Now Time For the deck fix

Monsters:

Tribs:

Jinzo (Work With Me)
Airknight Parshath/Zaborg (Both Good Offensives)
Mobius The Frost Monarch (Clear Away Magics and Traps)

4 and Lower:

Goblin Attack Force x 2
Zombyra The Dark
Giant Orc x 2
Sangan
Berserk Goriila x 2
Mad Dog Of Darkness
Tribe Infecting Virus
Breaker The Magical Warrior
Magician Of Faith x 2
Mataza The Zapper
Mystic Swordsman LVL 2
Cyber Jar
Enraged Battle Ox x 2

18 Monsters

Magic:

Premature Burial
Pot Of Greed
Graceful Charity
Delinquent Duo
Nobleman Of Crossout x 2
Smashing Ground
Heavy Storm
Book Of Moon
Snatch Steal
Swords Of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Fairy Meteor Crush
United We Stand
Lightning Vortex
Enemy Controller

16 Magic:

Traps:

Ring Of Destruction
Bottomless Trap Hole
Torrential Tribute
Mirror Force
Call Of The Haunted
Magic Cylinder

6 Traps:

40 Cards

But this is just my view of what it could be like anyway

oh and take out Monster Reborn: Very Banned

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to do with number 2....
there are cards like gravity bind and mask of restrict in the deck that leaves the opponent with nothing to do with the card if he ends up using cards like snatch and steal. who on earth uses call of the haunted, premature burial or ring of destruction (unless theyve got a deathwish). magical cylinder is a good card i have nothing against that..



Number 8. Jinzo is one of the most useful cards for a tactical attack, summon him and the only real cards that can stop you are scapegoats, book of moon (the killer) and Enemy Controller, he is one of the ultimate kill cards

and ill rephrase the other number..

Number 8. Jinzo is one of the most useful cards for a tactical attack, summon him and the only real cards that can stop you are scapegoats, book of moon (the killer) and Enemy Controller, he is one of the ultimate kill cards riageki dark hole every monster with higher attack. man eater bug. swords of relealing light, flint, acid rain completely owns jinzo, fissure (noobie card but still can kill jinzo) ect.ect.ect if i had time i could get a really really big list ...

to do with your number 2 stiggie, everyone i know uses call of the haunted, premature burial and ring of destruction.

Raigeki and dark hole are banned, every monster with higher attack? good luck trying to get one out.., swords of revealing light is stall, it dosnt take care of jinzo. flint once again dosnt take care of jinzo, merely holds him there. Acid rain, whats that do? O yh, and who uses flint anyway?

acid rain is a spell card that destroys all machine types on the field...

look m8... were both from different countries which have different types of people who play yugioh tcg. like i have said in one of my other posts. (not in this topic i dont think) i work in a trading card shop with the yorkshire champions uncle and cousin.. i 1st took a deck to the cousin who plays against the yorkshire champion and he gave me suggestions on how to make it better. i took those words into my mind and made another deck. i then took the upgraded deck (this one) and he told me that it was a really good deck and that he liked the way i used the cards in my many combos in the deck.. before anyone posts again please take in mind most of you are from america. i am from england and yes.. my deck does have a theme. i know my deck doesnt contain many super popular rare cards because i dont beleive just because a card is popular that it will help me in a duel.. and i dont have many really rare cards either because they dont hold many events around where i live. ive learnt to create strategies using the not so rare cards to make combos that are as good or even better than combos that are full of ultra rare cards. you lot probably just see it like this..

*looks at deck*
*notices only about 6 holos*
*sees 'some' combos with 'some' of the cards*
*then ask me to fill it with popular cards like jinzo*

it doesnt fit my style...
so far with my deck the scores against other duellist in my area are
13 wins : 1 loss

i only lost because my opponent used a similar deck that included 3 envoy of the beginnings..

lol, im from england too, im running an insect deck that is doing well and it hardly has any rares, trust me, there are some powerful cards out there that would seriously help your deck but w/e, its up to you i guess

Ok man seriously less of the noobness ffs, this is rediculous, you try to use gravity bind, errrrr....... arent la jinn and mad dog and most of your deck level 4 or higher, seriously if you can't take a good fix why do i bother...

oh and in response to the ring and premature and call, look at every other deck in the deck depot, get with the times they are all the most useful cards in the game

OH AND RAIGEKI AND DARK HOLE CANT TAKE OUT JINZO NOW COS THEY ARE BANNED!!!!!

Oh and By The Way we arent all american, im irish so...... dont assume

its not noobieness.. its called how this deck is built to suit its purpose.

about the
(arent la jinn and mad dog and most of your deck level 4 or higher)
i know what i am doing. it is a very good stall card to help me sacrifice monsters to power up for my chaos necromancer just incase i need it.

and about the
(oh and in response to the ring and premature and call, look at every other deck in the deck depot, get with the times they are all the most useful cards in the game)
ill only have a rin a premature burial and a call of the haunted if i use a FOUR WEDDINGS AND A FUNERAL DECK! ( :nervous: )


and also..........
(OH AND RAIGEKI AND DARK HOLE CANT TAKE OUT JINZO NOW COS THEY ARE BANNED)

I WAS GIVING EXAMPLES PEOPLE DO PLAY TCGS WHEN THERE NOT
IN TOURNAMENTS, IN THAT CASE BANNED AND RESTRICTED CARDS DONT MATTER!