Hello everyone I'm new here and I wanted to see if any of you guys could help me with my favorite deck ''The Monarch's Hand''.

The deck resolves around the concept of Monarch Control by affecting my opponent's hand & field leaving them open so I can lay down the big hurt on them.
When doing corrections on my deck please do not suggest adding in Graceful or Duo because I want this deck to be high in difficulty.

Monsters x19
Tribes x3
x2 Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch
x1 Mefist The Infernal General

x1 Cyber Jar
x1 Breaker The Magical Warrior
x1 Tribe Infecting Virus
x1 Exiled Force
x1 Tsukuyomi
x1 Night Assailant
x1 D.D. Warrior Lady
x1 Sangan
x2 Berserk Gorilla
x2 Magician Of Faith
x2 Spirit Reaper
x2 Don Zaloog

Spells x15
x1 Smashing Ground
x1 Swords Of Revealing Light
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon
x1 Pot Of Greed
x1 Premature Burial
x1 Heavy Storm
x1 Snatch Steal
x1 Nobleman Of Crossout
x1 My Body As A Shield
x1 Reload
x1 Monster Reincarnation
x1 Giant Trunade
x1 Reload
x2 Soul Exchange

Traps x8
x1 Ring Of Destruction
x1 Magic Cylinder
x1 Torrential Tribute
x1 Robbin Goblin
x1 Magic Drain
x2 Sakuretsu Armor

I would like to thank the people in advance that help fix/rate my deck and in return I will help anyone with theirs just leave a link. :)

This long and still no post ? :(
come on, help-a me out-a!