Monsters

Mask of Darkness
Dimension Jar
Cyber Jar
Des Koala
La Jinn The Mystical Genie of the Lamp x2
Invader of Darkness
Giant Orc
Whip Tail Crow
Opticlops x2
Shadow Slayer
Summoned Skull
Dark Magician
Dark Blade x2
Old Vindictive Magician
Mystic Tomato
KA- Des Scissors
Relinquished
Dark Jeroid
Sangan
Zombryra the Dark

Magics

Different Dimension Capsule
Tribute Doll
Soul Exchange
Black Illusion Ritual
Tributed to the Doomed
Change of Heart
Mystic Plasma Zone
Premature Burial
Nobleman of Crossout
Swords of Revealing Light
Back to Square One
Monster Reborn
Axe of Despair
Malevolent Nuzzler x2

Traps

Dust Tornado
Raigeki Break
Collected Power
Micro Ray
Michizure
Arsenal Robber
Adhesion Trap Hole
Shadow Spell
Jar of Greed
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Heres my dark deck I created today, plz rate/review etc. thanks

please review my deck etc.
















(Dark Deck Rules :)

Monsters 18

Summoned Skull
Jinzo
Giant Orc x3
Archfiend Soldier x3
Kycoo x3
Mechanical Chaser x3
Tribe Invecting Virus
Cyber Jar
Magician of Faith x2

Magics 17

Premature Burial
Smashing Ground x2
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Heavy Storm
Giant Trnade x2
MST
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Snatch Steal
Scapegoat x2
Mystic Plazma Zone x2
Terraforming

Traps 6

Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Bottomless Trap Hole x2
Torrential Tribute
Ceasefire

I dont have any of those cards you suggestioned :/

Monsters: 17

1 Jinzo
1 Dark Rule Ha Des
2 Giant Orc
2 Archfiend Soldier
2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
2 Newdoria
3 Mystic Tomato
2 Witch's Apprentice
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 Tribe-Infecting Virus

Spells: 17

1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Pot of Greed
1 Graceful Charity
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
2 Nobleman of Crossout
2 Smashing Ground
2 Book of Moon
3 Mystic Plasma Zone
1 Giant Trunade

Traps: 6

1 Call of the Haunted
1 Mirror Force
1 Ring of Destruction
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Dust Tornado
1 Bottomless Trap Hole

Total: 40

Graceful Charity
Scapegoat
Mystic Plazma Zone
Nobleman of Crossout
Pot of Greed

Ok , I think I can get 5 cards ( I listed above) that both of you suggested from one of my cousins, im thinking of adding a Graceful Charity , a Scapegoat, one more Mystic plazma zone , one more nobleman of crossout and pot of greed.

Ok, I think I can one more Giant Orc, but im going to have to keep all the other monsters the same for now.

Ok, what cards should I take out for the 5 cards above ?

Monsters Total= 17

Summoned Skull
Invader of Darkness

Mask of Darkness
Giant Orc x2
Mystic Tomato
Whiptail Crow
Zombyra the Dark
Opticlops x2
Dark Blade x2
La Jinn The Mystical Genie of the Lamp x2
Dark Jeriod
Shadow Slayer
Witch of Black Forest
Cyber Jar

Magics Total=16

Back to Square One
Malevolent Nuzzler x2
Different Dimension Capsule
Soul Exchange
Chang of Heart
Axe of Despair
Swords of Revealing Light
Tributed to the Doom
Monster Reborn
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Mystic Plazma Zone x2
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial

Traps Total=6

Raigeki Break
Jar of Greed
Shadow Spell
Michizure
Spellbinding Circle
Dust Tornado

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Ok just got some cards from my cousin, I wasnt able to get all the cards you guys suggestioned, so I had to keep some I had in the deck. Ok hows this , please review the deck up above ( with suggestions added) and if you have any more suggestions post them as well, thanks