Just a typical Phoenix/Zombie hybrid. You rate/I rate.

Nice Zombie-Phoeniz concept, well try and make it a bit better:

- Exiled
+ Tsuku (much more abusable in this deck)

- Apprentice (chances are your just gonna need 1 for when you need either MoF or HoN)
+ Breaker (you can abuse it with Apprentice and Tsuku as well)

- Monster Reincarnation
+ BoM

Very nice 8/10

-1 ryu kokki
-1 exiled force
-2 apprentice magician
-1 monster reincarnation
-1 raigeki break
-1 Book of Moon

Five tributes is a tad bit much. Exiled force isnt that great. Apprentice magicians are unnecesary, as are the reincarnations. the break is also unnecesary. I would prefer not to use moon in its lonesome

+2 book of life
+Breaker
+D.D. Warrior Lady
+Delinquent Duo
+2 tsukuyomi

6/10 before changes, 9/10 afterwards.

Please rate, fix, and choose from my shonen choices

I figured there were some comments coming toward my Raigeki Break. I understand 2 for 1 is bad hand advantage. That just makes people not want to use it right there. I, however, have had that card bail me out of so many situations. Horus and Skill Drain are becoming more popular at my local tourney area, and Raigeki Break is one of the utilities to crush them, along with any other card (except Jinzo and Royal Decree), and is a thorn in the side to Cyber Jar mill decks. Also, five tributes may be a bit too much, but all of them can be brought from my deck to the field, so usually in a game, about 3-4 tributes, and half I just discard if I don't have anything worse. Book of Moon is really good tech, especially with Crossout, so I'll keep the Book. Exiled Force, just plain creature destruction. I do not own a Breaker or D. D. Warrior Lady, and I do just fine without them (they usually take up space that restricts me from using certain things. Apprentice is good defense and Crossout bait, other than that, thins the deck. I try to keep stuff a bit original, without trying to use too much cookie-cutter cards. I have Tsukuyomi side-decked so I can switch deck types if they decide to side in against my Zombie/Phoenix, or if I lost the first match. I appreciate all comments and suggestions, but just because my deck lacks some cookie-cutter crap, doesn't mean it can't win...

-1 Monster Reincarnation
+1 Book of Moon

I like what u're doin here the deck looks real nice but here are a couple cards to think about another BoM, a Book of Life, 1 Vampire Genises(probly best for ur side deck), and a Dark Dust Spirt(also for your side deck or it could be a good replacement for Ryu Koki), but nice deck 3.5/5