Monsters:

Unfriendly Amazon x3
Amazoness Paladin x3
Amazoness Swordswoman x2
Amazoness Chainmaster x2
Amazon Archer x2
Amazoness Fighter x3
Amazoness Tiger x2
Amazoness Blowpiper x2

Spells:

Axe of Despair x2
Fusion Sword Murasame Blade x3
Snatch Steal
Premature Burial
Warrior Returning Alive x2
Amazoness Spellcaster x2
Scapegoat x2
Giant Trunade
Heavy Storm
Swords of Revealing Light
Graceful Charity
Pot of Greed

Traps:

Amazon Archers x2
Dramatic Rescue x2
Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
Trap Hole x2
Call of the Haunted
Torrential Tribute

This needs a little work. I've been experimenting with an Amazoness deck and I now see the potnential in it (years later? way too late). However, I want to let you know that in the Japanese version, the Unfriendly Amazon is translated as another card that does not have the name Amazoness or Amazon, that's why it's the exception to all the Amazoness support. Also, with the low ATK of all the Amazoness, they are all searchable via Giant Rat and Reinforcements of the Army, so I want to incorporate that. But who cares, on to the fixes:

Monsters:

Unfriendly Amazon -3 (not subject to Amazoness support & bad field management)
Amazoness Swordswoman +1 (Great effect, maximize it's use)
Amazoness Chainmaster -1 (LP payment is too much for 2)
Amazon Archer -1 (1200 LP burn is alot. Great with Scapegoat, but situational)
Amazoness Blowpiper -1 (2 is too much)
Giant Rat +2 (Searching power.)
Gigantes (Spell/trap destruction & swarm ability & strong monster & easy to summon in this deck. Hard to pass up)

Spells:

Axe of Despair -1 (2 is not necessary with Gaia Power)
Fusion Sword Murasame Blade -3 (3 is not necessary with Gaia Power)
Mystical Space Typhoon +1 (too good to pass up)
Warrior Returning Alive -1 (I'm not sure on this. If you like two then okay)
Reinforcements of the Army +1 (more searching power)
Scapegoat -1 (Had to cut down on spells)
Gaia Power +3 (Adds more muscle to those already built women)

Traps:

Amazon Archers (Had to cut down on traps)
Dramatic Rescue -1 (Had to cut down on traps)
Compulsory Evacuation Device -2 (had to cut down on traps)
Trap Hole -2 (doesn't prevent special summoning)
Ring of Destruction +1 (good card)
Mirror Force/Sakuretsu Armor +1 (good card)
Bottomless Traphole +1 (if you still want some kind of traphole)

So my final lineup is:

Monsters: 17

Amazoness Paladin x3
Amazoness Swordswoman x3
Amazoness Chainmaster
Amazon Archer
Amazoness Fighter x3
Amazoness Tiger x2
Amazoness Blowpiper
Giant Rat x2
Giagantes

Spells: 16

Axe of Despair
Snatch Steal
Premature Burial
Warrior Returning Alive
Amazoness Spellcaster x2
Scapegoat
Giant Trunade
Heavy Storm
Swords of Revealing Light
Graceful Charity
Pot of Greed
Mystical Space Typhoon
Gaia Power x3

Traps: 7

Amazon Archers
Dramatic Rescue
Ring of Destruction
Call of the Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Sakuretsu Armor
Bottomless Traphole

I give the old deck a 7/10 and the new deck 9/10.

Thanks alot for the help I think I'll make those changes