I'll also r/f anyone's decks if they can help me make this deck run better

Monsters:17

3X Cyber Dragon
Airknight Parshath
2X Mystic Tomato
2X Spirit Reaper
MoF
Big Shield Gardna
Sangan
Morphing Jar*
Cyber Jar*
Breaker
D.D. Warrior Lady
D.D. Assailant
Don Zaloog

Spell: 16

2X Giant Trunade
2X Enemy Controller
Reinforcements of the Army
Confiscation
Brain Control
Emergency Provisions
Card Destruction
Snatch Steal
Book of Moon
NoC
MST
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial
Dark Hole

Trap:7

2X Ordeal of a Traveler
Jar of Greed
Bottomless Trap Hole
Torential Tribute
COTH
Waboku

Fusions

2X Cyber Twin Dragon
Cyber End Dragon
Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon

Side Board: 15

2X Zombya of the dark
Jinzo
DMOC
Dark Mmic LV3
Lightning Vortex
Metamorphosis
Polymerization
Fusion Sage
Giant Trunade
2X Sakuretsu Armor
Magic Drain
Deck Veastation Virus
Ray of Hope

* I may take these two out since they help my opp. too, any sugestions would be nice for replacements

This is for the new ban list comming in Oct. I've revised this deck and I made it Ban-list acceptable, but I would like to get some serious opinions on how to make it run at full strenght(or better).

I've also updated this to make it function a little better, if no one has any suggestions for this cool, if not, fine, I won't waste anymore time on this cause if no one want to help, then I won't post on this again