great i was tryin somthin like this myself but i used 2 dark magician... this deck has what it needs to hav...u wont be ran over by cyber dragons or berserk gorilla...but i do think that u should loose metamorphosis and add an enemy controller dark magician doesnt do well with meta and gatling is about the only thing that phoenix would become...which is risky in itself...yeah this just needs an enemy controller and maybe a jinzo and this will be tourny ready.

- Magical Merchant

- Skilled Dark Magician

+ D. D. Master

+ Return from the Different Dimension

~Ody

B2flyblack - Reason for no second DM is because it would be too tribute heavy especially since all the tributes would be double tributes.

Odysseus - can you please explain your fixes because i dont see how they would help since i really dont have any monsters that get removed all that much, so D.D. Master wouldnt really do anything for me

KirbyWaddleDee - the reason for the double apprentice is because they can search each other plus they can be grabbed with magician's circle, and ive found only having one with two catches doesnt work very well. Also the reason for no old vintage is because its a flip spellcaster, so it cant be really be abused, but i know what your getting at with double apprentice with only two targets.

THanks to all who've tried to help...anyone else.

ALso, if you guys had decks you wanted me to check leave an url or link