R/F will be returned

-confiscation
+NoE/giant trunade

reason: Confiscation isn't all that great, unless your running a certain deck that it supports, but here it seems thrown in like you think it's a staple. You Have 9monster removal cards:
BotH(2)
Sak Armor(2)
TT
Dark hole
Smashing ground(2)
NoC
and if you include the monsters:
DD warrior lady
Exiled force
Newdoria
and if you count the situational ones(like using for tributes and MSMLV2 effect):
Snatch steal
brain control
Book of moon
comes out to a grand total of 15 monster removal cards.
Ok now with that out of the way, lets look at your s/t removal cards:
Heavy storm
MST
Dust tornado
A grand total of 3. :rolleyes:
Your ratio of monster removal to s/t removal is 9:3 or 15:3, not very good. When I went to regionals only the decks with a good ratio(means closer to being equal) made it to the finals. You need to up your s/t removal cards, or else your gonna rely on slugging it out with your opponent or just getting killed. Here's what i mean: You'll be able to kill your opponents monsters, but then yours will die via his traps and such. While he/she will attack you and so forth
or they'll have a good ratio, and heres what will happen:
You'll kill them with spells, and attack, your monsters will die via trap. Your opponent will kill your traps and attack freely, now your on defense. Eventually you'll lose or your hope for luck.
Now give Jinzo as your trap-stopper because he's just 1 card in your entire deck, and if you base your deck around hope for that one card, then it will not win. Especially considering you're running a zombie deck, not a Jinzo/machine deck or others with jinzo.
So putting ALL these together I think you see what i mean. Adding another s/t removal will overall help out, or finding a way for another as well. :)
I won't offer my fixes on Monsters since you obivously haven't taken them from before.
Hope this help :)

my suugestion is

- 1 book of life ( you only have 9 zombies, 3 aren't needed )
- 1 confiscation (not needed )

+ 2 Dust Tornado

- 1 Kycoo the ghost destroyer

+ 1 Newdoria

Thnks ppl's sorry if it took long 4 me to respond.

HellionDemetros- thnks as always i will consider the s/t fixes and already looking for more tornados and NoE.

crazyr14- thnks also ill b taking confiscation out.

i don't know what you'll think, but I would propose to

- mystic lv2 (not really searchable unless by giant rat)
- newdoria

+ spirit reaper ( never have enough of those)
+ V-Lord of ryu kokki (pyramid turtle and book of life, because they are better to get out than a reaper)

I would also tell you to take out Pot of avarice, I know its good, but with your 3 book of life, premature and call of the haunted, it may not be always good in this deck

It's a bit situational, but i've had some success with Dark Deal being chained to my opponent's normal spells when I have a Despair from the Dark in hand. There is a chance factor, but it's well worth making your opponent sweat whena 2800 ATK beatstick falls from the sky. Despair in multiple is also great against people using offensive Spirit Reapers and Dons.

well,

- nobleman of crossout
+ brain control

- bait doll
+ nobleman of Extemination

- kycoo
- kycoo
+ Vampire Lord
+ Mystic Tomato

hope you like the fixes,

7/10 keep up the good work