ok this is the deck please rate/fix it:



is there some kind of card that lets you draw more than once each turn?




monsters:
v-tiger jet x3
w-wing catapult x3
x-head cannon x3
y-dragon head x3
z-metal tank x3
Reflect Bounder x2
Gear Golem the Moving Fortress
Morphing Jar


Magic:
dark hole
heavy storm
premature burial
swords of revealing light
mystical space typhoon
Soul Release
Re-fusion x2
limiter removal
frontline base x2
Luminous Spark
Two Man Cell Battle


Traps:
Call of the haunted
Magic Cylinder
Negate attack
Rope of Life
Rollout! x2
Return from the different dimension
Ultimate Offering


Fusion deck:
VWXYZ dragon catapult cannon x2
XYZ dragon cannon x2
XY dragon cannon x2
XZ tank cannon x2
YZ tank dragon
VW tiger catapult x2


Side Deck:
nothing yet... i need ideas

ok i have added a side deck now so can somebody please rate this!!!

Running Cyber Dragon fusions in parallel to a VtoZ deck is extremely difficult. Are you sure you want them combined? You're also aware that Power Bond won't be able to fuse any of your VtoZ pieces, right? I'll help you on your deck when you've decided.

ok i wont do the cyber dragon fusions but i think it would be a good idea to keep 1 in my deck

so i need to find 5 replacement cards

i have removed some cards so now i need to put in a side deck and some more cards in my deck

Alright, we need to clear up some more stuff first.

-1 Cyber Jar

-1 lightning vortex
-1 monster reincarnation
-1 tribute to the doomed
-1 gravekeeper's servent
-1 stray lambs

-1 Magic Cylinder
-1 Rope of Life
-1 Trap Jammer
-1 Magic Drain
-1 A Hero Emerges

We have a total of 16 cards that need filling up.

+1 Morphing Jar
+1 Soul of Purity and Light
+1 Magician of Faith

+1 Frontline Base
+1 Dark Hole
+1 Snatch Steal
+1 Premature Burial
+1 Book of Moon
+1 Scapegoat
+1 Soul Release
+2 Soul Absorbtion

+1 Torrential Tribute
+1 Formation Union
+2 Roll Out!

thanks alot for the useful tips, however i think that a hero emerges can be useful and that cyber jar is all i have access to

Not bad.

I would agree with iVie that Frontline base will help the deck a bit - give you a bit of swarm /field presence. Stick one or two in there.

I notice that you have two RfDD traps in there but at the minute you have no remove from game cards in there, so try a soul release to remove your monsters.

Last thing I would sugest you might want to try is Luminous Spark. Usually don't recommend field cards but the 500 boost would help keep your VWXYZ pieces on the field a bit longer. I would suggest that you give it a try just to see how it works out.

thanx for the tip
i will write up a new deck and see what everybody thinks

tribute monsters (1) :
1x Jinzo
3x Cyber Dragons

normal monsters (17) :
3x v-tiger jet x3
2x w-wing catapult
3x x-head cannon
2x y-dragon head
2x z-metal tank
3x shining angel
1x sangan
1x cyber jar
1x Reflect Bounder
2x Gear Golem The Moving Fortress (Good Def)

Magic (8) :
1x lightning vortex
1x heavy storm
1x swords of revealing light
1x mystical space typhoon
1x Premature Burial
1x Limiter Removal
1x Scapegoat
1x Dark Hole
1x Snatch Steal
1x Enemy Controller
1x Power Bond
1x Brain Control

Traps (9) :
1x Call of the haunted
1x Magic Cylinder
1x Torrential Tribute

Fusion deck
2x VWXYZ dragon catapult cannon
2x XYZ dragon cannon
2x XY dragon cannon
2x XZ tank cannon
2x YZ tank dragon
2x VW tiger catapult
2x Cyber Twin Dragon
2x Cyber End Dragon

plz r/f my deck

i have updated the deck and have put in a new side deck. what does everybody think???

you kind of lsot me... on post number ten you say you have 9 traps... and i counted your cards and you only have 39... or maybe i miscounted... anyway fix that please...?

no u counted write

however i didnt post that and i cant edit it

I would say the main weakness of an VtoZ deck is hand maintenance. Cards that promote bad hand maintainence (ie. Cyber Dragon, no matter how godly anyone might think it is), should be left out.

From your latest deck modification:

You don't need perfect Machine King or Blowback Dragon. In fact, they add to the the clutter of the deck. The deck has a speed problem, so if you have to add anything in, it'd either be some Jars, or some Dekoichis. You don't need tributes, really. If you can fuse an XZ (which you definately should be able to do if you play smart, and hold your FLBase and XCannons), it can practically take out anything. A Hero Emerges might go great with those Big tributes, but then again, A Hero Emerges is a limited trap card that can only be activated during battle phase. It will most likely fall prey to Mobius, Breaker, Dust Tornados, MSTs, or heck, Decree. Concentrate on bringing out VtoZ. You're looking for consistency and speed. I'd take 3 Dekoichis instead of A Hero Emerges and those 2 Tributes.

ok ive done some more editing and unfortunately taken out the side deck (again) so can someone help me with that