Ok, heres my first build of a zombie deck. I really need some help with it. Please only give advise no insults or flaming please. I know im new to the game so please dont post a deck in place of mine. tell me why to change cards. Tell me why to add or take out. Ok, well here it is.

Monsters (23)
Regenerating mummy x3
Master Kyonshee x2
Des Lacooda x2
Double coston x2
Castle of dark illusions
Pyramid turtle x3
Spirit Reaper x2
dark Dust Spirit x2
Ryu Kokki x2
Vampire Lord x2
Despair From the Dark x2

Magics (17)
Call of the mummy x2
Card of safe return x2
Book of life x3
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Nobleman Of Crossout
Dark hole
Swords of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Scape Goat
Premature Burial
Axe Of Despair
Tribute to the doomed

Traps (5)
Trap Jammer
Torrential Tribute
Call of the Haunted
Sakuretsu Armor x2