So I have made this deck, after having traded and come together with enough cards to make it work. I am looking for opinions and suggestions on it and please be kind.

Fusion
XYZ-Dragon Cannon x 2
XZ-Tank Cannon x 2
YZ-Tank Dragon x 2
XY-Dragon Cannon x 2
Cyber End Dragon
Cyber Twin Dragon x 2

Monsters
Jinzo (Trap Disruption and attacker)
Cyber Dragon x 3 (Speed and numbers)
X-Head Cannon x 3 (Attackers)
Vorse Raider x 3 (1900 Beat Stick)
Y-Head Dragon x 2
Z-Metal Tank x 2
D.D.W.L.
Sangan (Fishing)
Shining Angel x 2 (Fish out Y-Head and Z-Metal tank so they might be fused)
Breaker The Magicial Warrior (Field Control 1900 Beat Stick)
Magician of Faith (Spell renewal)

Spells
Return From a Different Dimension x 2 (Bring back the removed XYZ pieces to form the big fellow.)
Mystical Space Typhoon (Field Control)
Heavy Storm (Field Control)
Polymerization x 2
Power Bond (Power Up Cyber Twin and Cyber End Dragon)
Fusion Gate (Remove Cyber Dragons and bring them back with Return From Different Dimension)
Limiter Removal (BANZAI!!!!!)
Pot of Averice (Deck Renewal/Card Drawing)
Lightning Vortex (Dump a useless spell for field dominace)
Premature Burial

Traps
Dust Tornado x 2 (Field Control)
Sakuratsu Armor x 2 (Defense)
Trap Jammer x 2 (Pesky Traps)
Torriental Tribute
Call of the Haunted

Hi Everybody.
Hi Dr. Nick!!!

Likes It, Looks A Lot Like The 1 I Made, But No Darks Were In It...Later Switched The XYZ's For Silent Swordsman
Return From A D.D. Are Traps Its The Dimension Fusion That Are Spells...
I Went With One Of Each, In Case Jinzo Was Out Or A Horus...
I Ran 2 Soul Of Purity And Lights To Remove The Cyber Dragons As Well, Then Return To Fuse Them Quick... Also Card Destruction To Move Quicker

Still would like some feed back on this. I love advice and pointers.

hey that looks good the big machines lol i give it 8/10

fixes are:

maybe u should add soul release (good with with dimention fusion, i rather use dimetino its better than paying half your lp sometimes) and any way people always try to make your monsters out of the game or the grave yard so... it won't be hard to summon them

and a terraforming (really makes it fast for the fusion gate:

so here is the summuy of what u should add:

soul realease
terraforming
dimention fusion

and its your choice what to take out lol

hope that helps

plz rate my decks (in my sig) thanks

I love the deck. I had a deck like that, but i had a cyber-stein in mine. Because from what i heard you could special summon cyber twin dragon and cyber end dragon by cyber-steins effect.

Please rate and fix my Gilford's Revenge deck

If you really wanted to go all-out with ur big machines you could get ur hands on VW Tiger Jet, V-Tiger Jet, W-Wing Catapult, and VWXYZ Dargon Catapult Cannon (Elemental Energy)
VW Tiger catapult
machine/6/2000/2100
“V-Tiger Jet”+ “W-Wing Catapult”/This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use “Polymerization”) By discarding 1 card from your hand, change the battle position of 1 monster on your opponent’s side of the field. (Flip Effects are not activated at this time)
VWXYZ Dargon Catapult Cannon
machine/8/3000/2800
"VW-Tiger Catupult + XYZ Dragon Cannon"
This card can only be special summoned from you fusion deck by removing from play the above cards from ur side of the field. (no polymerization). Once per turn, remove from play 1 card on ur opponent's side of the field. When this card attack, you can change the battle position of the attack-target monster. (Flip effects are not activated for face down cards)
This card has power, but is very hard to summon, having to fuse 5 monsters to make 2 monsters, then fuse those together....
It's ur choice, im just being open-minded.