Will someone please rate this deck. I'm going to out of town regionals this Saturday because I didn't place for the Championship (I got 5th place. i was off by
1 position.) So, I've revamped my deck and I want to make sure that it is in tournament winninng condition. I will be happy with any and all suggestions. I don't care about criticism, so if you think my deck sucks, just tell me. But if you do think there is something wrong with this deck then tell me.

Monsters: 19
Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8
Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6
Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys
Hand of Nephthys
Goblin Attack Force
Goblin Elite Attack Force
Apprentice Magician
Apprentice Magician
Marauding Captain
Marauding Captain
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Magician of Faith
Mystic Swordsman LV2
Sangan
Old Vindictive Magician
Command Knight
Tsukuyomi
D.D. Warrior Lady
Spirit Reaper

Spells: 13
Fissure
Brain Control
Dark Hole
Premature Burial
Heavy storm
Swords of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Extermination
Metamorphosis
Reinforcements of the Army
Snatch Steal
Scapegoat

Traps: 11
Dimension Wall
Acid Trap Hole
Call of the Haunted
Magic Cylinder
Dust Tornado
Bottomless Trap Hole
Sakuretsu Armor
Sakuretsu Armor
Torrential Tribute
Spell Shield Type-8
Royal Decree

Fusion Deck: 5
Cyber Twin Dragon
Dark Blade the Dragon Knight
Ryu Senshi
Dark Balter the Terrible
Thousand Eyes Restrict

Side Deck:15
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Fissure
Spear Dragon
Jinzo
Wave Motion Cannon
Command Knight
Amazoness Swords Woman
Book of Moon
Lightning Vortex
Bottomless Trap Hole
Solemn Judgement
Exiled Force
Slate Warrior
D.D. Survivor
Cyber Jar