I need help with this deck it's full of mistakes i know it so please help me out



Monsters
Perfect Machine King x1
Mechanicalchaser x3
Heavy Mech Support Platform x2
V-Tiger Jet x1
W-Wing Catulpult x1
X-Head Cannon x1
Y-Dragon Head x1
Z-Metal Tank x1
Cybernetic Magician x1
Cyber Jar x1
Jinzo x1
Shining Angel x3
Inpachi x3
Machine King Prototype x1

Fusion Monsters
VWXYZ-Dragon Catulpult x1
XYZ-Dragon Cannon x1
VW-Tiger Catulpult x1
XY-Dragon Cannon x1
XZ-Tank Cannon x1
YZ-Tank Dragon x1

Spells
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Soul Release x1
Frontline Base x2
Miracle Dig x1
Premature Burial x1
Reload x2
Luminous Spark x1
Limiter Removal x1
Combination Attack x1
Poison of the Old Man x1
Hammer Shot x1
Question x1
Amplifier x1

Traps
Chthonian Blast x1
Magic Drain x1
Nutrient Z x1
Return From Different Dimesion x1
Trap Hole x1
Hallowed Life Barrier x1
Divine Wrath x1
Nightmare Wheel x1
Roll Out x2

Can you please give me your opinion i want to know if this is a good deck!!!

I've been trying to put together a machine deck also. I think rollout is only for Big Core and the B.E.S. monsters. Also the vwxyz monsters and fusions really are best as a deck in and of themselves. If you're going for a nonfusion machine deck, then just use x-head in multiples as well as the tiger jet.

idk if you are able to get your hands on some cyber dragons but if you could that would help you a whole lot, but i was going to tell you that you need to get the staples but i think you want all machine so here it goes

-perfect machine king(hes not really that good but hes cool)
-3x inpachi(to low you can do better)
-Jinzo(he can hurt you)
-cybernetic Magician(hes not a machine)
-cyber jar(hes a rock and he can hurt you)

well keep the shining angels you can get ur vwxyz's out

+V
+Y
+X
+y
+Z

-amplifier
-sould realease
-hammer shot
-poison of the old man

+3x smashing ground

-cnthionuian blast or w/e
-nutrient z
-nightmare wheel
-2x rollout
-divine wrath
-trap hole
-hallow life barrier

+3x sak. armor
+2x bottomless trap hole
+call of the haunted


that should help you out a little better

but try to get atleast 2 or 3 cyber dragons they are great

okay got it But can Perfect Machine still be good because this deck will still be mostly machines and what about using DNA surgery and turning every monster on my side and opponents monsters into machines?

eh the deck mods br3ak3r made are good, but cyber dragon had become a set now so maybe id say try out a cyber dragon deck (i dont mean to disrespect br3ak3r or anything)

For the moment i think i won't be making a Cyber Dragon Deck i'll just stick to using a deck that does not focus on one card, okay how about using a regular Machine King it only needs one monster to summon