Hi before rate or change cards in my deck i just wanna put in clear some points

1- I dont need you tell me i need the next cards:
Lv up
Lv Modulation
Royal Decree
The Graveyard in the Four Dimmension

2- If youll going to do a change leave a good explanetion about the change
3- Please rate the deck
4- leave a link and i will help you
5- i dont want to put out the next cards:
Tsukuyomi
Enemy Controller
Newdoria

So here is the deck

Monsters:21

Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv. 8
Jinzo
Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv. 6
Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv. 6
Cyber Dragon (when i have it)
Cyber Dragon (when i have it)
Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
D.D. Assailant
Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv.4
Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv. 4
Blade Knight
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Mirage Dragon
D.D Warrior Lady
Newdoria
Tsukuyomi
Exiled Force
Sangan
Spirit Reaper
Spirit Reaper
Magician of Faith
Magician of Faith
Treeborn Frog

Magics:13

Pot of Avarice
Brain Control
Graceful Charity
Heavy Storm
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Crossout
Swords of Revealing Light
Enemy Controller
Enemy Controller
Mystical Space Typhoon
Scapegoat
Premature Burial
Snatch Steal

Traps:8

Widespread Ruin
Mirror Force
Torrential Tribute
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Sakuretsu Armor
Sakuretsu Armor
Call of the Haunted

I wiil apreciate a lot if you help me
Thnks for understand the points i wrote.

C'mon people i have a tournament in two days and i need sugestions

I think NoC became one for advanced format. And I'm no you dunt want things about lvl up and such, but u should seriously consider a Lvl Modulation. My bro got a Horus Lvl 8 out and kicked my Fiend deck. Also, why are you asking for help now when the tourney is just two days away?

All in all, I give it a....

3.5/10

Some cards just seem thrown in there and there is a card that can whipe your deck clear off the board. And most decks will prolly have one.

Raviel LOD if you check the list of forbiden and limited cards nobleman of croosout is restricted to two cards.
And i dont want to use magics of lv up or modulation is because they dont have space in my deck and only slow my type of deck and personaly i think those cards sucks.

if you would like, this deck got me third in two reginals one of which was this past sunday...

monsters:

2x horus Lv8
3x horus Lv6
3x horus Lv4
1x mystic swordsman LV6
2x Mystic swordsman Lv4
3x Mystic swordsman Lv2
3x cyber dragon
1x jinzo
1x reflect bounder
1x cyber jar
1x twin-headed behemoth
1x tsukuyomi
1x D.D. worrior lady

spells:

1x brain control
1x tribute to the doomed
1x swords of revealing light
1x premature burial
1x dark hole
1x heavy storm
1x lightning vortex
1x book of moon
1x scapegoat
1x snatch steal
1x MST
3x level up!

Traps:

1x magic Cylinder
1x torrential tribute
1x call of the haunted
1x royal decree
3x dust tornado
3x bottomless trap hole

side deck:

1x elephant statue of darkness
1x sangan
1x exiled force
1x creature swap
1x mage power
1x axe of despair
1x seven tools of the bandit
1x DNA surgery
1x chthonian polymer
1x judgement of anubis
2x magic jammer
1x nightmare wheel
2x compulsory evacuation device