Tis really heavy in monsters maybe if you could help lighten it...









Monsters :23
3 Sacred Crane
3 Maruading Captain
2 Hand of N.
1 Sagan
1 Breaker
2 Spirit Repear
2 Cyber Dragon
2 Chaos Sorcerer
2 Magician of Faith
1 Don Zaloog
1 Phoenix
1 Jinzo
1 D.D Warrior Lady
1 Mobius

Magics: 14
2 Reinforcement of the Army
1 Graceful Charity
1 Premature
1 MST
3 Smashing Ground
2 Nobleman
1 Avarice
1 Snatch Steal
1 Heavy Storm
1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps:6
3 Sak Armor
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Torrential
1 Mirror Force

Take out nepthis and its hands. That would take you down to 20 monsters.

I agree with dropping the Phoenix, or maybe side decking it. Diversifying your Sakuretsu Armors into more stuff, preferably stuff that hits Mobius may be a good idea.

The whole Crane deck is a pretty good idea. Personally I'd try to add some more ways to special summon your Cranes or give your Marauding Captains a better target for special summoning. Maybe Injection Fairy Lily.

I'd also reccommend editing your first post and pressing adding one more line of space between your little blurb and your deck. Otherwise peek-age is possible.

Please take a look at the deck in my sig.

Well the idea behind the Neph. stuff was to give Marauding something to summon but i will think about it.

I also think you should take out Pheonix and its hands. And try to find a few cards to take out to put in a couple of Dust Tornados. And Please rate my deck too. The post is...The Flames of Horus Burn Strong. Its just a few posts below this one.

It's too tribute heavy. Here's what I think your monster line-up should look like...

3 Sacred Crane
2 Maruading Captain
1 Jinzo
1 Sangan
1 Breaker
2 Spirit Repear
2 Cyber Dragon
1 Chaos Sorcerer
2 Magician of Faith
1 Don Zaloog
1 D.D Warrior Lady
1 D.D. Assailant
1 Exiled Force
1 Mystic Swordsman LV2

This is a 20 Monster line-up, and it not only is more reliable with fewer tributes but also ultilizes the warriors in the deck. 3 Marauding is too much, he is really only good with the Sacred Crane. The deck should use beatdown to fight off the opponent until you have enough board presence and have lowered their resources enough to drop the Crane/Captain uncontested. Side deck 2-3 Mobius. I would also try to cut down on some spells so you are able to fit in some Trap Holes or Bottomless Trap Holes as well. That is my advice, take it for what it's worth and thanks for commenting on my deck.

-Blader