Monsters 21:
3x Battery Man AA
3x Battery Man C
3x Battery Man D
2x Super Electromagnetic Voltech Dragon
2x Thunder Nyan Nyan
3x Shining Angel
1x The Creator
1x Zamborg,the Thunder Monarch
3x X Head Cannon

Magic 12:
3x Battery Charger
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Enemy Controller
1x graceful Charity
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Book of Moon
1x Monster Reincarnation
1x Premature Burial

Trap 8:
2x Damage Condensor
2x Sakuretsu Armors
1x Solem Judgement
1x Negate Attack
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Mirror Force

so tell me what you think.

-1 Batteryman C
-1 Batteryman D
-1 Negate Attack
-2 Damage Condenser
-1 Monster Reincarnation
-1 Enemy Controller

+1 Super-Electromagnet Voltech Dragon
+1 My Body as a Shield
+1 Sakuretsu Armor
+1 Bottomless Trap Hole
+2 Nobleman of Crossout
+1 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch*

*I'm not really sure about throwing in another tribute, but with Batterman D, you should be able to keep a monster or 2 for tributes.

Mind making a suggestion for my Puppetmaster deck? Links in the sig, thanks.