I know this deck needs a bit of work but this is about the best I can do for now...

Tribute Monsters:4
2x Mystical Knight of Jackal
1x Big-Tusked Mammoth
1x Jinzo

Non-Tribute Monsters:17
3x Berserk Gorilla
3x King Tiger Wanghu
3x Pitch-Black Warwolf
3x Hyena
2x Chiron the Mage
1x Enraged Battle Ox...only have one or would have used 2
1x Sangan
1x Exiled Force

Spell Cards:14
2x Smashing Ground
2x Creature Swap
2x Rush Recklessly
1x Premature Burial
1x United We Stand
1x Graceful Charity
1x Heavy Storm
1x Giant Trunade
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Book of Moon
1x Mystical Space Typhoon

Trap Cards:5
2x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Beast Soul Swap
1x Ring of Destruction
1x Call of the Haunted

*glances over at my avatar* Hey, How'd I get in this deck?

Well I suggest that you drop a King Tiger for either an Exarion Universe or a scapegoat.

Thanks for the tip. I will try to get one of those cards. I used to have a scapegoat but I can't seem to find it anymore.

Anymore ratings/tips? I could use some help. I'm tryin to make this deck powerful enough to beat one of my friends decks based on Mesoleum which is pretty powerful...

This deck looks pretty strong already, just a few minor changes to be done:

Use Nimble Momongas instead of the Hyenas, they have the same effect and give you life points.

Maybe drop 1 Rush Recklessly or 1 Smashing ground for a Pot of Avarice. Since you're not removing any monsters from the grave, you should meet it's conditions without much trouble.

Try to get a Mirror Force and replace one Sakuretsu with it.

Maybe also give Behemoth, King of all Animals a try. I know, it's another 2-Tributer, but his effect gives you beasts back so he makes up for the tributes. Plus, if your friend is running mausoleum, you could get him on the field without tributes as well, since field spells work for both players. Not sure what to take out for him, though.

i give a 8/10 i playes a beat deck when it wasnt a big deck so now that we have all these new cards this deck should work Maybe some Manticore of Darkness

I think you should add Scapegoats and you also need Exarion which is amazingly helpful but overall i say 6/10 cuz i don'y like the king tigers

Why don't you like the Tigers? They protect my creatures from that destructive little card known as Exiled Force. I appreciate all the comments you all have posted. And I will try to get some of the key cards like Mirror Force and Pot of Avarice soon.

well maybe cut back to 2 tigers cause at 1700 atk there effect isnt that great i think 2 should suffice but thats just me

Yes but the question is...what would I put in to replace it? I don't have Mirror force of Pot of Avarice like I said before.

Anymore ratings? I want to make this deck as strong as it can become.

if u wnat to make it stronger this is what u could do
-3 Hyena
-2 Chiron (these dont do anything for u)
-1 Big Tusked Mamoth
-1 King Tiger
-1 Mystical Knight of Jackal

+2 Bazoo
+3 Nimble Momonga
+1 Behemoth
+2 Manticore
with this is should be very hard to stop and the maticores would always be out and bazoo gets more food

also mirror force would not be that bad of a card to use if u have it after that it should be fine unless u want to run a Return or Dimension Fusion

Thanks. I don't have those cards right now, but I'm trying out the changes in YVD with the guy I'm trying to beat. Hope they work.