plz rate and fix. i will return the favor.


40 cards


monsters: (20)

4 star and lower:
sangan
x2 pyramid turtle
x3 mystic tomato
x2 apprentice magician
jowls of dark demise
big eye
skelengel
MoF
man eater bug
dd warrior lady
asura priest
breaker


5 - 6 star:
airknight parshath
ryu kokki
x2 goldd wu lord of dark world


spell cards: (13)
graceful charity
book of moon
mysti space
nobleman
dark world lightning
swords
x2 creature swap
premature burial
mage power
wicked breaking flamberge
heavy storm
fissure


traps: (7)
x2 sakretsu armor
magic cyl
torrential tribute
magic jammer
trap hole
call of the haunted

monsters: (20)

4 star and lower:
sangan
x2 pyramid turtle
x3 mystic tomato
x2 apprentice magician
Jowls of dark demise
Big eye
Man eater bug
asura priest
skelengel
MoF
dd warrior lady
asura priest
breaker

5 - 6 star:
airknight parshath
ryu kokki
x2 goldd wu lord of dark world

Ok Lets see monsters, Im not sure exactly where your trying to go with this deck but lets fix this...

- Jowls - better cards for that effect
- Big eye - useless
- Man eater - better cards for the effect
- Asura - not neccesary anymore
- skelengel - not 2 good
- 1 Goldd - Put 1 in the side deck against hand control decks

+ old vindictive - better then man eater and searchable with apprentice
+ spirit reaper - lots of ways of getting him on field... turtle, tomato,sangan
+ Dekoichi - much stronger then skelengel with same effect


spell cards: (13)
graceful charity
book of moon
mysti space
nobleman
dark world lightning
swords
x2 creature swap
premature burial
mage power
heavy storm
fissure
wicked flamberge



Ok Now Spells....

- fissure
- Wicked Flam

+ 1 creature swap
+ 2 smashing grounds


traps: (7)
x2 sakretsu armor
magic cyl
torrential tribute
magic jammer
trap hole
call of the haunted

Finally Traps...

- Magic Jammer
- Trap Hole

+ Ring of Destruction
+ Mirror Force

Finishing touches should look like this

monsters: (19)

4 star and lower:
sangan
x2 pyramid turtle
x3 mystic tomato
x2 apprentice magician
Old Vindicive Magician
x2 Dekoichi The Locomotive
Spirit Reaper
MoF
dd warrior lady
asura priest
breaker

5 - 6 star:
airknight parshath
ryu kokki
goldd wu lord of dark world

spell cards: (14)
graceful charity
book of moon
mysti space
nobleman
dark world lightning
swords
x3 creature swap
premature burial
mage power
heavy storm
x2 smashing grounds

traps: (7)
x2 sakretsu armor
magic cyl
torrential tribute
Mirror Force
Ring of Destruction
call of the haunted

I tried to give as much advice as i could. hope you like what i did to it

i just changed my deck.

here's the line up

42 total

monsters: (21)

4 stars and lower:
magician of faith
man eater bug
sangan
mask of darkness
x2 apprentice magician
x3 mystic tomater
x3 pyramid turtle
skelengel
asura priest
blade knight
dd warrior lady


5-6 star:
airknight parshath
ryu kokki
cybernetic magician
goldd wulord of dark world
dark dust spirit/ vampire lord (which is better?)


spells: (14)
x2 creature swap
swords
mysti space
wicked breaking flamberge
share the pain
heavy storm
dark world lightning
tribute to the doomed
malevolent nuzzler
graceful charity
mage power
premature burial
book of moon


traps: (7)
torrential tribute
x2 sakretsu
call of the haunted
magic jammer
trap hole
magic cylinder

anyone else? could use some help.