Monsters:24: fusions: dark flare knight,elemental hero rampart
hand of nephthys -blaster,ojama king,
mask of darkness
magician of faith x2
d.d warrior lady
millenium scorpion
skellengel
pyramid turtle
man eater bug
tskuyomi
mataza the zapper
susa soldier
big eye
fushi no tori
giant rat
sangan
flame ruler
apprentice magician
gemini elf
mobius the frost monarch (frosty)
mystic swordsman lv4
ryu kokke
mirage knight
sacred phoenix of nephthys

spells:11:
mystical space typhoon
creature swap
spell absorbtion
nobleman of crossout
mage power
fusion weapon
metamorphosis
soul reversal
gravekeepers servant
swords of revealing light
lightning vortex

traps:9:
draining shield
xing zhen hu
damage condenser
sakeretsu armor
call of the haunted
ordeal of a traveller
magic cylinder
shadow spell
thunder of ruler

Wrong language...if you want english responses, move this to the English Deck Depot...you'll only get Japanese answers here...

I can tell you right now that this is, no offense, very poorly, constructed...you seem to have NO real theme going here. Just a bunch of random cards that you think are good with a bunch of cards that would not work very well at all in the Deck...

First of all...before even CONSIDERING actually constructing a Deck...pick out an actual theme first...like do you want it to revolve around a certain Monster Main-Type (Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Dark, Light) or Sub-Type (Dragon, Warrior, etc)??? Or do you want it to be a certain "family"?? (Blue-Eyes, Red-Eyes, Guardian, Gravekeeper, etc) Or maybe other themes like Fusion, Burn, Ritual, etc???

Right off the bat...

- Guarding Hand of Nephthys
- Mask of Darkness
- Saint Magician x1 (restricted 1 per Deck)
- Millenium Scorpion (not needed)
- Skelengel (not needed)
- Pyramid Turtle (doesn't help much in anything but Zombie or EARTH theme)
- Man-Eater Bug (not needed)
- Moon Diviner (Forbidden)
- Surprising Mataza (not needed)
- Susa Soldier (not that great)
- Big Eye (not needed)
- Fushi No Tori (not needed and not that good)
- Giant Rat (unless it's an EARTH Deck or something)
- Flame Ruler (not really good in anything, but FIRE Decks with Tributes)
- Gemini Elf (not needed)
- Mystic Swordsman LV4 (not that good by itself)
- Ryu Kokki (not needed)
- Mirage Knight (not needed)
- Phoenix God of Nephthys (not needed)
- Forced Transfer
- Magic Absorption (not needed)
- Fusion Weapon (will hardly be needed, so not needed)
- Metamorphosis (can't even bring out that much in your Deck)
- Soul Reversal (not needed)
- Gravekeeper's Familiar (not needed)
- Drain Shield (not needed)
- Xing-Zhen-Hu (not needed)
- Damage Condenser (not needed)
- Curse of Darkness (not needed)
- Thunder of Ruler (not needed)

Suggestions (in general):

+ Metamol Pod
+ Early Burial
+ Tempest
+ Hand Obliteration
+ Holy Barrier - Mirror Force
+ Reactive Armor x1-2
+ Bottomless Pit Trap x1-2