OK here's the deal I haven't played in a YGO tourney since late `05 and before that it had been almost as long since I considered myself a "serious player". (I talked myself into being an adult for a while.) I spent the last quarter of `06 playing M:tG and my wife talked me into playing YGO over the holidays. Well that led to my "habit" returning and I've spent the last few days emptying my wallet to rebuild a deck for myself. I've kind of kept an eye on the meta-game whenever I was in the local shop playing M:tG so I have some idea of what's big. Long story short here's the deck I built and I'd appreciate some assistance so that I can become the threat that I once was.

Monsters: 22
1. Jinzo
2. Mobius the Frost Monarch
3. Cyber Dragon
4. Cyber Dragon
5. Cyber Dragon
6. Blade Knight
7. Breaker the Magical Warrior
8. Elemental Hero Wildheart (Fits in the deck and makes me feel "Rogue")
9. DD Warrior Lady
10. Mystic Tomato
11. Mystic Tomato
12. Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
13. Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
14. Exiled Force
15. Exiled Force
16. Marauding Captain
17. Sangan
18. Destiny Hero – Doom Lord (Fits in the deck and makes me feel "Rogue")
19. Spirit Reaper
20. Night Assailant
21. Mystic Swordsman LV2
22. Magician of Faith

Spells: 13
23. Book of Moon
24. Brain Control
25. Enemy Controller
26. Fissure
27. Graceful Charity
28. Heavy Storm
29. Mystical Space Typhoon
30. Nobleman of Crossout
31. Pot of Avarice
32. Premature Burial
33. Reinforcement of the Army
34. Reinforcement of the Army
35. Smashing Ground

Traps: 5
36. Call of the Haunted
37. Ring of Destruction
38. Sakuretsu Armor
39. Sakuretsu Armor
40. Torrential Tribute

I know that I could use a Mirror Force here but that's either going to have to wait until the next pay period or I'll be getting a divorce.

Sideboard: 15
1. Sillva, Warlord of Dark World
2. Sillva, Warlord of Dark World
3. Morphing Jar
4. Injection Fairy Lily / Goldd
5. Confiscation
6. Creature Swap
7. Creature Swap
8. Magic Cylinder
9. Bottomless Trap Hole
10. Bottomless Trap Hole
11. Royal Decree
12. Royal Decree
13. Dust Tornado
14. Dust Tornado
15. ???? / DD Survivor / Goldd.

Meh... this is more of a "What could save my arse?" stack than a sideboard but it was hastily thrown together, so I don't expect it to be great.

If anyone would be kind enough to help me, I'd greatly appreciate it.

you definatel need a cyber twin or end, i got an incoming twin one if you want to trade me for it. Overall I would say 8/10

this deck does not need cyber twin or end dragon.it may help not sure but it isnt needed.i would remove the fissure for a second smashing ground/. 2 brain controls or 2 enemy controllers is far supieror to 1 of each i would go with 2 enemy controller but that is up to u. 1 lone murading captain? put in a second. night assalient is nice but i would remove it.
im not sure about the lone doom lord and wildheart either but they may be ok