Ok guys I need help making these decks better before i go to regionals if you rate my decks ill fo the same in return all i need is a link thank you.. the first deck is mine the second deck is my brothers


Monsters
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
3 Cyber Dragon
1 D. D. Assailant
1 D. D. Warrior Lady
2 Exiled Force
1 Jinzo
1 Magician of Faith
2 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Mystic Swordsman LV2
2 Mystic Tomato
1 Newdoria
1 Sangan
1 Spirit Reaper
2 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
1 Treeborn Frog
1 Twin-Headed Behemoth
2 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

Magic
2 Brain Control
1 Graceful Charity
1 Heavy Storm
1 Last Will
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Reinforcement of the Army
1 Scapegoat
2 Smashing Ground
1 Soul Exchange

Traps
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
1 Ceasefire
1 Magic Drain
1 Mirror Force
2 Sakuretsu Armor


My Brothers Deck

Monsters
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
2 Chainsaw Insect
3 Cyber Dragon
1 D. D. Assailant
1 D. D. Warrior Lady
1 Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
2 Exiled Force
1 Jinzo
1 Magician of Faith
2 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Morphing Jar
1 Old Vindictive Magician
1 Sangan
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
1 Treeborn Frog
2 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

Magic
1 Brain Control
1 Creature Swap
1 Graceful Charity
1 Heavy Storm
1 Last Will
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Premature Burial
2 Smashing Ground
1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps
1 Bottomless Trap Hole
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Magic Cylinder
2 Magic Drain
1 Mirror Force
1 Ring of Destruction
2 Sakuretsu Armor
1 Torrential Tribute

deck 1 7/10
deck 2 6/10

in deck 1 i would remove the 2 fire monarchs. add another zaborg and maybe another tomatoe... or something. remove soul exchange and add confiscation. remove the 2 bottomless trap holes add a 3rd sakuretsu and a ring of destruction. i would also remove magic drain for torrential tribute but i guess thats not nescassary.

for deck 2 i would remove the fire monarch and add a zaborg. remove the creature swap and add a 2nd brain control. creature swap is good but brain control works much better in 2s then 1 . remove the bottomless add a 3rd sakuretsu. i again would remove both magic drains and replace with a ring of destruction and confiscation.

my decks listed below if you would like to rate.

thank you for comments ill try those changes and see what happends

For deck 2

- 2 Chainsaw
- 1 Random Dekocihi

+ 2 Apprentice Magician
+ 1 Old Vindictive

- Magic Cylinder
- Magic Drain 2x

Don't add anything, 40 card deck

Then

- Creature Swap

+ Premature Burial
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Deck 1

- Ceasefire

+ Ring of Destruction

- Magic Drain

+ Torrential Tribute

- BTH 1x

+ Sakuretsu 1x

- Mobius 1x

+ Zaborg 1x

- Mystic LV2

+ Tomato

- 2 Thestalos

+ 2 Granmarg (Like a 4th and 5th Zaborg or mini-Mobius)

thank you for the comments ill try those fixes

hmm

-2 mobius or at least 1, you play jinzo
-1 twin. you have 2 brain control, 3 cyber dragon and a soul exchange

+2 swaps

sangan, 4 goats, 2 mystic, newdoria, and i guess lv 2 are good candidates

-1 bottomless
-1 drain
-1 ceasefire

all bad dead draws during a tight game

+1 torriential tribute
+1 Mirror Force
+1 ring

1st deck seems very aggro to the point apprentice and old's aren't needed

Your Deck:

- Ceasefire
- Magic Drain
- Jinzo
- Mobius
- Mystic Swordsman LV2

+ Sakuretsu Armor
+ Torrentail Tribute
+ Ring of Destruction
+ Pot of Avarice
+ Eneny Controller / Book of Moon

Nice Deck
85/100

Good luck at your Regional.

Your Brothers Deck:

- Magic Drain x2
- Magical Cylinders
- Call of the Haunted

+ Sakuretsu Armor
+ Enemy Controller
+ Book of Moon

- Chainsaw Insect x2

+ Pot of Avarice
+ Scapegoat

- Jinzo
- D.D. Asssailant
- Mobius

+ Apprentice Magicain x2
+ Old Vindictive Magician

Nice Deck
85/100

Good Luck at your Regioanls