...need advices!

Monstters:
1x Jinzo
1x Zaborg the Thunder Monarch
2x Cyber Dragon
2x Mystic Tomato
2x Newdoria
1x Sangan
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Mystic Swordsman lV2
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
1x Magician of Faith
1x Night Assailant
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
2x Asura Priest
2x Exiled Force
TOT:19

Spells:
3x Enemy Controller
1x book of Moon
1x Scapegoat
1x Brain Controll
2x Creature Swap
2x Smashing Ground
1x Reinforcement of the Army
1x Pot of Avarice
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Heavy Storm
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Graceful Charity
1x Last Will

Traps:
3x Royal Decree
1x Torrential Tribute (or is better Mirror Force?!)

Here's my advice:
- 1 Enemy Controller
- 1 Night Assailant

+ 1 Mirror Force
+ 1 Cyber Dragon

I am really becoming distraught at the fact of people are posting and using decks near to be exactly like yours. The real problem occurs when the question is asked to fix your deck. A simple answer would be to RUN SOMETHING ELSE, but people can't convince that notion. They seem to believe that Cookie Cutter still exists even though the format can't support a Cookie Cutter theme for more than 1 SJC, thus making it something MUCH less of a Cookie Cutter, more along the lines of a Fad. We can easily look at your deck and honestly say that:

a.) Hydrogeddon tech is used at your local tournaments.
b.) Apprentice Magician tech is used at your local tournaments.

That’s the reason why you've added 2 Asura Priest so that you can combat your opponent’s field presence with 1 card. But it doesn't stop there, in order to really fix you deck, to make it playable in your next tournament, you're going to have to think of new ways to gain field presence out side of using the conventional means. That's the reason why people now side 3 Des Wombat and 3 Royal Decree, Chain Strike have left its mark on the Metagame for ever.

Well...here in Italy the most common Decks are the Monarch and the Macro Cosmos.... I hate playing the same deck of all the others so I've try to do this one.... In both case I should be advantage.........
Hydroggedon tech is not so really used.....
Apprentice Magician tech is used from a lot of people....
(sorry 4 my english guys....I'm from Italy....)

a.) use this to traslate --> Click Here <--
b.) If every thing is the same it breeds in weakness. Just take a moment as asses your local metagame to see what and why the cards their running.
c.) any questions please reply back.

Havn't understand your last post....not because is in english but I havn't uderstand the sense....

a.) usi questo a traslate -- scattisi qui

b.) Se ogni cosa è la stessa alleva nella debolezza. Introito giusto un il momento come sguardo al vostro metagame locale per vedere quale e perchè le schede loro usando.

c.) tutte le domande soddisfano la risposta indietro.

I'll do...thnx for the advices.... About the deck coul you tell me somethings?!...

La vostra piattaforma è senso all'eccedenza giocata intorno al mondo. La gente consantly sta sbagliandosi il Monarchs come schede di “Cookie Cutter”, quando non sono. Per renderli alla piattaforma migliori devono investire nella costruzione della piattaforma che può maneggiare facilmente Tribtue ha convocato i monsters. Una volta che siete configurazione in grado un la piattaforma che può fare quella, potete eccedenza fate funzionare una piattaforma di Monarch in un aspetto delle girate. Quando aggiungono Hydrogeddon ed Apprentice Magiciian alle loro piattaforme aggiungete 1 Asura Priest in moda da poterli eliminare voi fuori i suoi monsters possibili per offrire come tribtues. Potete inoltre noi Skll Drain e Mask di Restrict ridurre i vostri effetti degli avversari con il possibilty per arrestare tutto il tributo Summonings in generale. Spero che aiuti.

Your advices are very interesting, thnx for all!
If someone have other advices.......