hey this is my first post on this site and i wanted to show my deck.
tell me what u think. (this is a traditional deck)
p.s its mainly the warriors structure deck so i need to add better warrior cards plz help me...
p.p.s i also plan to eventially make into a warrior-spellcasters deck so put them in to.

tribute monsters:

gilford the legend
gearfried the sword master
swift gaia the fiece knight

monsters:

gearfried the iron knght x3
darkblade x3
invader of the throne
ninja grandmaster sasuke
kojikocy
crimson sentry
exiled force
warrior lady of the waste land
familiar knight
command knight
masaki the legendary swordsman
mataza the zapper
sasuke samurai #1
celtic guardian
cyber jar
d.d warrior lady
zombyra the dark
diciple of the forbidden spell
goblin attack force
obnoxious celtic gardian

spell cards:

hammer shot
monster reborn
axe of despair
graceful charity
poison of the old man
mystical space typhoon
fusion sword marasume blade
axe of despair
release restraint
warrior returning alive
wicked breaking flamberg-baou
reload
lightning vortex
lightning blade
reinforcements of the army x2

trap cards:
magic jammer x2
a hero emerges
draining shield
trap hole
blast with chain
hallowed life barrier
call of the haunted
hidden book of spell
wall of revealing light
fake trap
a rival appears
coffin seller
rising energy
royal command


enjoy!!

hmm..1 think that kicks me in the manhood is that you only have 1 disciple of the forbidden spell in there, if you're just using it for the attack thats alright, but if you want to get its ability i suggest adding at least 1 more...

thanks the problem is that i cant find another diciple and i dont get enough money to buy the necessary booster pack so i do mainly use it for attack

With that said please explane exactly what your Theme and Support is. I'm willing to bet it sopose to be a Gearfried the Iron Knight theme deck, but there are so many cards in the deck which have nothing to do with Gearfried OR Equip Spell cards. Please reply back ASAP

from what i see...the theme is warriors...and in my opinion...making a deck around a single card i.e Blue Eyes White Dragon, is a very stupid move, true it can work, but it is only super effective against the same opponent one time, once the opponent knows the strategy of the deck, he can easily break it.

^ My opinion. Don't bite my head off =)

In opionion it was an example and you took it out of context, explaning in detail what theme and support is. You simply took it out of context. Regarudless if its Blue Eye White Dragon, Gadgets, Last Turn, Magical Scientist OTK or Exodia they all have Theme and support. If this deck has a theme then its support should match it. Just because the deck is compirsed of warriors doesn't mean that it is the theme. Running differnt warriors, will change the support of the deck as a result change its theme. His warriors are too wide spead or are a LV 4 Normal 1500 attack monster I.E. kojikocy. So now he has to take the time to sit down and define what his deck does, just like my example above.

PS:
Thats why the game has something called "Side Deck's". If you're dumb enough to think that your opponent will not side deck you, you need to read this article I wrote along time ago

CLICK HERE

well my theme is warriors mainly based around gear fried the sword master and gilford the legeng that is y i have heaps of equip cards in there coz of there effects with equip cards

and my support is the equip cards i make my darkblade around 2600, 2800 on the first turn and the people i verse tremble infront it and i have cards in my deck that stop them from acticating spell cards like mystical space typhoon and magic jammer.

[quote=Hajime Saito]In opionion it was an example and you took it out of context, explaning in detail what theme and support is. You simply took it out of context. Regarudless if its Blue Eye White Dragon, Gadgets, Last Turn, Magical Scientist OTK or Exodia they all have Theme and support. If this deck has a theme then its support should match it. Just because the deck is compirsed of warriors doesn't mean that it is the theme. Running differnt warriors, will change the support of the deck as a result change its theme. His warriors are too wide spead or are a LV 4 Normal 1500 attack monster I.E. kojikocy. So now he has to take the time to sit down and define what his deck does, just like my example above.

but as i said before i cant get cards at all now nobody has them and i get no money. maybe u could give me some examples for my deck???
plz?????

Actually, it'll help a little if you just take out some of the cards that isn't necessary in this deck. Cards like celtic guardian, kojikocy, masaki the legendary swordsman are absolutely useless. Try to make this deck a 40 (or somewhere around there) so you'll have a bigger chance to draw what you need.

Yes, you equip dark blade with an equip card to boost his attack power, you attack and your opponent activate sakuretsu armor. Well, you just lost 2 cards compare to them losing only 1. Honestly, most equip cards just aren't very useful (other than snatch steal, oh how i miss u!)

(p.s. I feel sorry for you, i am pretty sure saito is going to do some major insulting to that comment you just made....)

There, I just got rid of some of the cards that you have in this deck and it should run a little better now. Of course, you need to get some new cards if you want this deck to be competitive. If you did bought a warrior structure deck before, then i believe that u should have maruading captain and both mystic swordsman lv2 and 4 as well. If you do, replace sasuke samurai with mystic swordsman lv2 since lv2 is better. You can also get rid of swift gaia for maruading captain and get rid of dark blade for a mystic swordsman lv4.

As for spells, there's a heavy storm in the warrior structure deck too so u might want to put that in too and snatch steal also since you are playing traditional anyway.

thanks for thatany other ideas plz post them up
thanks

Dont run what wind1 posted it like the one you posted, lacks theme and support.

Try this:

Monster:18
1 Jinzo
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch
2 Gearfried the Swordsmaster
2 Marauding Captain
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
2 Goblin Attack Force
3 Gearfriend the Iron Knight
1 Exiled Force
1 D.D. Assliant
1 Mystic Swordsman Lv.2
1 Sangan
1 Sprit Reaper
1 Magician of Faith
1 DD Warrior Lady

Spell:17
2 Reinforcements of the Army
1 Graceful Charity
1 Scapegoat
1 Pot of Greed
1 Premature Burial
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Book of Moon
1 United We Stand
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
2 Release Restraint
3 Smoke Grenade of the Thief


Trap: 7
1 Torrential Tribute
3 Blast with Chain
1 Mirror Force
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Ring of Destrution

i dont have half those cards! and i would like to keep it just warriors please
personally i like wind1's deck it works great

You really have no idea how many bad draws his deck will give you. THe deck is built for the advance ban, where OTK's lies in wait. You need to have somthing solid to combat this, so you will not be able to keep it just warrior, you'll need help from "out side" forces. Being Breaker, Jinzo and Mobius are perfect additions because they enable your warriors to get craking at your opponents monsters and LP with out having to worry about his M/T.

The following are cards which you shouldn't run in your deck and why:

gilford the legend: This is utter crap unles your running Ben Kai and Collected Power, but you're not so drop it

swift gaia the fiece knight: It really severs no purpose in the deck, you're going to have a hand 90% of the time. If you still want it side deck it.


darkblade: One the most crappest warrior to add to the deck, its a only use is in a Union deck being Kiryu and company. In addition its attack is 1800 and its a normal monster... well that would only mean that you wasted your money to actually summon this.

invader of the throne: Its effect wont actiavte if it is fliped face upfrom an attack... so drop it, it will only become target practice for exprinced players.

ninja grandmaster sasuke: Not really nessary in your main deck, side deck it. It may come in handy later...

zombyra the dark - There are better high attack LV 4 warriros you can use... like 3 more Goblin Attack Force for starters.

obnoxious celtic gardian - Until the STON is released in america this card is pointless, go hide it under you bed until then.

hammer shot - Destroys the higest attack mosnter in attack postion on the FIELD so if your monster has the higest attack, well its "### is grass". Smashing Ground, Nobleman of Crossout or Fissure would do alot better.

poison of the old man: Your deck isn't built for LP gain, none what so ever along with no need to do effect damage to your opponent.


axe of despair - Their better equip spell cards you can run hence some of the ones I listed in the deck I posted.

warrior returning alive- Pot of Avarice would better to use instead of Warrior Returning ALive. Pot of Avrice can retrun 5 USEFUL monsters back to your deck so you can use them again!

lightning vortex: THIS IS THE TRADITIONAL BAN BUY A RAIGEKI OR DONT PLAY AT ALL.

a hero emerges: This is complete crap unless you have high lvl and attack monsters in your hand. NOTE: This cannot special summon Gearfried the Swordmaster. Drop this for Trap Hole, Bottomless Trap Hole or more equip spell cards.

draining shield: Your deck isn't built to gain LP, it is built to play equip spell cards, and use the effect of Gearfried and company to have thier effects become god like towards your opponent. Drop this for someting more worth while, like Waboku, Sakuretsu Armor or Mirror Force

Wall of revealing light: This is purely used as a stall card. Currently in your deck, there are no cards which will make this card worth while to play. If you want a defensive card like this run Waboku or Mirror Force.

A rival appears: The card is to situational let alone nearly all of your monsters are lvl4.

ok, ok i will eventially make that deck hopefully-i dont even have half those cards i.e jinzo, mobius
but thanks any way
p.s wat does otk stand for?