ok i was driving in my car and i thought of a deck and i need some opions before i make it please rate and fix

monsters:

3xpyrimid turtal
2xvampire lord
2xcurse of the vampire
1xvampire genisis
3xsoul obsorbing bone tower
2xregenerrating mummy
2xzombie comander
2xzombie tiger
2xfear from the dark


spells:

3xbook of life
1xpremature burial
2xthe shallow grave
1xcard destrucion
2xlightning vortex
1xnobelman of crossout


traps:

2xsakuretsu armor
1xcall of the haunted
1xmirrior force
1xring of destrucion
1xtutans mask
2xgrave lure
2xkarma cut
ring o

needs: Graceful, Heavy, MST, Pot, Breaker, D.D Warrior Lady, Treeborn, Sangan.

doesn't need: zombie commander, zombie tiger, vampire genesis

why vampire genisis it is not needed

well the zombie tiger and zombie comader are in there because this deck is all about special summons smae thing with genisis plus but what i am going to do is take out one of the shallow graves and put in a call of the mummy as for the cards that were recomended i will put those in a side deck and use them if neccicary

does anyone else have any comments or rates

I definately wouldn't run Genesis, and vampire lord isn't that great since most people run cyber , but where's ryu kokki? Nowaday's ryu kokki cuts through everything that doesn't run tons of monster destruction ( which zombie decks can handle anyway) he kills horus cyber dark world, all kinds of things and I would run a rat box rather than those zombie tigers and generals and what not. You needs more monster destruction though, you have no fissures, and you have no spell/trap destruction, have you ever played with this deck???

Isn't curse of vampire a japanese card? For a moment, i thought i was in the japan section of the forum.

Along with monkeyman's idea, you should consider this too.
+ spirit reaper
+ ryu kokki

- 2 fear from the dark

ok yes i will add in the ryo kokkies and the spirit reapers and yes curse of the vampire is not out yet in america but it is supposed to come out in one of the next two sets as for vampire lord i will probly replace one with vampire lady i only use the lord for his choice destrucion effect and sine the lady has the same effect and is not a tribute i will probly use 1 lord and 1 lady

I really don’t people are reading... So lets be sure what kind of a deck you have. You're running 3x soul absorbing bone tower which is a very nasty mill theme card. With that stated since you are running 3x soul absorbing bone tower your deck now has to be constructed to mill out your opponent. If you think other wise then remove all 3 for the other theme that zombies can support with is an Aggressive theme. Using 3 Ryu Kokki, 3 Vampire Lord, Despair from the Dark, ect are prime examples of the cards you'd use. So why don’t you specify on what your main deck is going to be. We'll work on that THEN we'll work on your side.

ko if you did not get it from the name of the deck it is a deck depletion deck hints why i use so many cards that special summon zombies i went ahead and built the deck it usally takes 5 turns to deck my oponet out somtimes more somtimes less depends on my opening hand so i am thinking of putting in a magical mallet

What sperates your deck from your deck name is that it takes 5 turns to "mill" our your opponent. While it will take my team mate who runs the same theme as your 2 turns flat.

If you're going to speical summon Zombies then run:

3 Vampire Lord
3 Giant Rat
3 Pryamid Turtle
3 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower
3 Book of Life
2 Card of Safe Return
1 Pot of Avarice
3 Asult of GQ

Thats just the basic outline give or take a few cards being MST, Heavy Storm, Call of the Haunted, Ring of Destrution, Breaker the Magical Warrior ect. You can fill those in your self and give your deck its own flare but nearly every card listed below wouldn't help the deck even if you pulled a god hand opening turn.

2xcurse of the vampire
1xvampire genisis
2xregenerrating mummy
2xzombie comander
2xzombie tiger
2xfear from the dark
1xnobelman of crossout
1xtutans mask
2xgrave lure
2xkarma cut
ring o (what ever this may be...)

well i know about that type of deck destrucion zombie deck and i used it alot back in the day [witch was like a 1 year ago LOL XD] i built this version because the people i face usally have OTK deck that usally kill me before i can deck them out atleast with this deck i just karma cut lets say the power ponded cyber end dragon or any other monster that is a big OTK thanks for the advice that you have givin me so far Hajime Saito you are one of the few people on here that knows what they are talking about i will have to post on your deck when i get home because for some reson the computer i am on were i am at will not let me go to your deck

As of the moment there are no valid OTK's in out Metagame, they have all been banned or the possibility of the executing 1st turn are nearly next to nothing. When a deck is constructed correctly it takes in to account of actually real threats and side deck's every thing else which out inhibit the theme for executing correctly. So you wouldn't side deck Kuriboh, but you'd main deck Messenger of Pear or Waboku to top those pesky "OTK's".