alright im going to talk this deck to the shonen jump its going to be completely hand control. There is 1 problem that im having with this deck is that if he gets a high monster on the field, its kinda hard for me to get it out the field. its seem to be running good thought, if anyone has any suggestion plz let me know

ok my deck

monsters - 19
1 - jinzo
3 - thestalos the firestorm monarch
2 - mobius the frost monarch
3 - cyber dragon

2 - gravekeeper's spy
1 - sangan
2 - mystic tomato
1 - d.d. warrior lady
2 - don zaloog
1 - spirit reaper
1 - treeborn frog

magic - 11
1 - premature burial
1 - pot of avarice
1 - giant trunade
2 - shrink
1 - snatch steal
1 - heavy storm
1 - confiscation
1 - brain control
1 - mystical space typhoon
1 - soul exchange

traps - 10
2 - trap dustshoot
2 - drop off
2 - sakurestu armor
1 - dust tornado
1 - mirror force
1 - torrential tribute
1 - ring of destruction

total = 40

sidedeck - 15
1 - smashing ground
2 - return from the different dimension
1 - macro cosmos
2 - dimensional fissure
2 - royal decree
2 - twister
2 - bansiher of the radiance
3 - d.d. survivor

- 2 Shrink
- 1 Soul Exchange
- 1 Giant Trunade

+ 2 D. D. Designator
+ 1 Trap Dustshoot
+ 1 Brain Control

Those are my advices on full Hand Control for your deck.

thanks i will try that for my local tourney, does anyone else has any advice?

All Hand Destruction with no Mind Crush?

I also enjoy the Magicial Hats + Dark Coffin Combo,

it may be a good idea to try the evac device, that way you could bounce a card then force them into discarding it, or Magicial hats something then bounce it into your hand.