42 Card Deck

Suggestions?

Monsters: 20
... Raiza the Storm Monarch
.. Caius the Shadow Monarch
. Dark Armed Dragon
.. Goblin Zombie
.. Mezuki
.. Zombie Master
.. Necro Gardna
. Sangan
. PSZ
. Mystic Tomato
. Spirit Reaper
. Dandylion
. Treeborn Frog

Spells: 12
.. Book of Life
.. Allure of Darkness
.. Fissure
. Soul Exchange
. Pot of Avarice
. Burial from the Different Dimension
. Heavy Storm
. MST
. Brain Control

Traps: 10
... PWWB
.. Bottomless Traphole
.. Mind Crush
. Trap Dustshoot
. Torrential Tribute
. COTH

Looks ok to me. I would side the Mind Crushes + Dustshoot for a 3rd Fissure, Foolish Burial, and maybe a Mirror Force

To run a good zombie engine, you need 1-2 Goblin Zombie, 1 reaper, 1 PZ, and 2 Mezukis. Anything else is just unneccesary, and fills up your deck with cards you dont need. Frog is mediocre too, i removed it right away in my build. Dandylion didnt work for me, you have things to tribute for your Raizas, you really dont need the tokens, and other than that, they dont serve any other cause.

2 Books of Life seems much, and definately remove the Pot of Avarice. You need your monsters in the graveyard. Personally, i prefer Trunade over Mst in any deck that can use Call of the haunted as a tribute fodder atm.

Idk about the mind crushes...

Generally, this deck is fun to play, but loses to Ls in the long run..