here's my latest team please tell me what you think: (its 400 pts.)

Black Thorn 114 pts.
Turbine 71 pts.
***Steam Mauler 81 pts.
**Khamsin Artillerist 28 pts.
*Steam Knight 46 pts.
*Dwarven Mechanic 24 pts.
Woundkiller 32 pts. (on Turbine)

Total: 396 pts.

please give comments

4pts not used isn't so good, can't you change a fig in another?

and one idea paragons sheild.

To make up the 4 points, swap your **Khamsin Artlierist for a ***Khamsin Artilerist.

I'd pop Galeshi Sunsword or Decapitator on Black Thorn.... she'd be a beast.

Or something else you could do to fill in the extra 4 pts is replace Turbine with Kyma w/ Snow's Fuser Rifle. You'd lose 1 ranged damage, but thats a 48" range vs 10" and a 12 ranged attack vs 10

thanks i have Paragon's Sheild no Kyma though

I strongly suggest trying to get a Kyma.... shes extremely versitile.

I quite like the look of this offering, although a bit of information on your thinking and strategy would make a sensible analysis more viable.
Changing figures in and out because of my preferences is not the ideal approach, what I would like to be able to do is look at your idea and try to offer thoughts and observations within the boundaries of what you wanted from it.

But that may just be the teacher in me :)

Incidently, making a full 300 is no longer essential, lowest cost army is a tie-breaker, so unless you can improve the army by spending those points it is not really a consideration.